Portrait Project [Film]
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C.Rosenthal
Registered: Aug 31, 2009
Total Posts: 405
Country: United States

A few terrible scans.

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This image is copyrighted by the owner

This image is copyrighted by the owner

-Clayton



hardlyboring
Registered: Apr 19, 2008
Total Posts: 5868
Country: United States

#3 has a great sense of place but could have used some better posing, not to say the pose you have is bad but I would have liked to see a few more of her facing the camera in that setting. the third shot is heads above the rest
doug



C.Rosenthal
Registered: Aug 31, 2009
Total Posts: 405
Country: United States

Thank you, Doug. I quite liked #3, as well.



kakomu
Registered: May 28, 2009
Total Posts: 3323
Country: United States

I like the comp of #3, but I don't care much for the model's pose. Same as above.

I don't care much for the clutter in #2. Everything seems to be in the way, including the model's hair.

#1 is very PJ-esque, though I"m a little confused about the purpose of the karate kid-like bandanna and OJ bottle...and the shoes don't really fit the scene.



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