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silvawispa
Registered: Nov 10, 2008
Total Posts: 613
Country: United Kingdom

Gem(nsfw)


Unfinished set of shots. all suggestions and comments welcome.

Definitely going for a high class look on these.



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
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Country: United States

Those are awesome Paul. LOve the set up and the creative framing 2.



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
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Country: New Zealand

Interesting series. I prefer the high key images. One small point, of the low key images, some could use some re-touching of the crease lines beneath her breasts.



silvawispa
Registered: Nov 10, 2008
Total Posts: 613
Country: United Kingdom

@Kaden, It has been mentioned that I should learn to frame and crop properly

@aunti: ta, i did mention they were unfinished, and I too prefer the high key ones.



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
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Country: United States


@Paul, disregard such mentions and do your thing irrespective. No one ever
succeeded by following the standard advice on any of these forums.



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
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Country: New Zealand

The great thing about suggestions is you can take them or leave them.



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
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Country: United States

...but I would suggest you pay close attention to AuntiPode's advise.



silvawispa
Registered: Nov 10, 2008
Total Posts: 613
Country: United Kingdom


kaden, about the framing, it's a shame there isn't a 'tongue in cheek' emoticon...

and about listening to aunti, always, she has a very good eye.



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
Total Posts: 3256
Country: United States

yes I would like a 'tongue in cheek' emoticon too.



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