Some Senior portraits
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nick pro
Registered: Dec 15, 2007
Total Posts: 253
Country: United States

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I'm not why my camera left strobe didn't go, but I dont really mind.
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This image is copyrighted by the owner

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damongrounsell
Registered: Jul 04, 2007
Total Posts: 165
Country: United Kingdom

I like these good all round shots, solid but could be improved
1 fine but needs more expression from subject, bridge distracts even of out of focus
2 & 3 framing I feel could be better but like idea and lighting
4 legs need to be to one side or other
5 maybe focus on eyes rather than leaves use of wider apature

Keep up the good work



RobertLynn
Registered: Jan 05, 2008
Total Posts: 10290
Country: United States

You're doing good work. Keep it up.

In #4, try a little higher angle, so it's not so much "upskirt", It's not bad at all, and I don't see anything that even a very conservative bathing suit wouldn't show, however some folks may get hung up on it.

There's suggestions to build a pose from the ground up, even if the feet aren't showing, or the person is sitting.



darrenwhitley
Registered: May 17, 2004
Total Posts: 706
Country: United States

Your flash is just too much for me. It doesn't create enough mood for my taste. It actually ruins it. Try softening the light more and controlling the spill better. It needn't light the entire person.



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