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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
Long-time lurker, first time post. |
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B Benson Registered: Jan 13, 2005 Total Posts: 7121 Country: United States |
Dang, who needs a different settings, great background blur, sharp, well exposed, well done. Bruce |
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tfoltz Registered: Jul 08, 2008 Total Posts: 14446 Country: United States |
Congratulations! #2 is my pick |
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Shasoc Registered: Aug 24, 2005 Total Posts: 24746 Country: United States |
Welcome to the Forum and ery good job with these, Jim. I like the first shot best as the bg is adding to the bg. You may want to try to use a vertical cro with that image as it would fit better the shape of the subject. For sure you should avoid placing the subject in the centerof the frame as it makes the image look static. Try also to use the center focus point aiming to the birds eye as that is the focus point of your image. Images look properly focused, clean and detail are fine. In the last image the birds eye looks OOF on my monitor. |
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Karl Witt Registered: Jul 11, 2007 Total Posts: 25594 Country: United States |
Hi Jim |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
B Benson wrote: |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
tfoltz wrote: |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
Shasoc wrote: |
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Tim Kuhn Registered: Nov 29, 2006 Total Posts: 31125 Country: United States |
Welcome Jim!! This is a fantastic first set, good on you!! The kids starting arguing |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
Karl Witt wrote: |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
Tim Kuhn wrote: |
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David Israel Registered: Nov 06, 2007 Total Posts: 3732 Country: United States |
Hey Jim, I was thrilled to see you finally putting up a post. I think these look terrrific. I'm really liking #1. The light object in the BG, giving that halo effect, worked out great. I agree with Socrate that a vertical crop would seem to fit better. I also like the border. |
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Thang Registered: Jan 25, 2004 Total Posts: 7615 Country: United States |
Welcome to the forum Jim and glad to see you have decided to post some wonderful shots. They all look terrific! Nice work on the isolation, BG, lighting and poses. |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
Did some recropping based on some wise FM'ers' advice... |
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jkermani Registered: Oct 04, 2004 Total Posts: 2803 Country: United States |
Such a cute bird that I've only seen once. Good job and keep them coming. |
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z06jim Registered: Jun 18, 2009 Total Posts: 5015 Country: United States |
Great looking first post, looks like your settings worked wonderful for these shots....welcome aboard.... |
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danjacquitaylo Registered: Jun 13, 2005 Total Posts: 14654 Country: United States |
Welcome Jim. Great first post. My fav of the bunch is #1 (and in vertical crop better). |
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Rob Tillyer Registered: Nov 17, 2007 Total Posts: 10090 Country: Canada |
Welcome aboard, great start. The last crop of the first picture (blue BG) is my favourite. |
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Karl Witt Registered: Jul 11, 2007 Total Posts: 25594 Country: United States |
Great re-works Jim IMO, it move you from being too centered and the verts emphasize your subjects nicely |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
David Israel wrote: |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
jkermani wrote: |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
z06jim wrote: |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
danjacquitaylo wrote: |
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jfwoodman Registered: Oct 31, 2007 Total Posts: 2240 Country: United States |
Rob Tillyer wrote: |
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David Israel Registered: Nov 06, 2007 Total Posts: 3732 Country: United States |
Hey Jim, I really like the new crops. You have improved upon some already good shots! |