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ShirleyP Registered: Oct 19, 2009 Total Posts: 121 Country: United States |
I shot these in Santa Cruz a couple of days ago at the Cold Water Classic preliminaries at Steamer Lane. Constructive criticism much appreciated. |
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ShirleyP Registered: Oct 19, 2009 Total Posts: 121 Country: United States |
A few more... |
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redgrom Registered: Apr 03, 2005 Total Posts: 754 Country: United States |
Shots look ok, only thing a few look soft to me, try shooting a little faster say min 1000th of a second. Just make sure you go out and shoot this weekend. Swell should be pretty big and looks like good conditions. When shooting off the cliff try to shot wider to show more of the wave. All around pretty nice stuff. |
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ShirleyP Registered: Oct 19, 2009 Total Posts: 121 Country: United States |
Thanks for the feedback. It was my first time shooting surfing. I've been trained to crop tight on action, but I get the logic of wanting to see the wave too. Here's another example that comes closer to your critique comments. I am going to try to get out there again - it was fun to watch and photograph. |
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redgrom Registered: Apr 03, 2005 Total Posts: 754 Country: United States |
I like that view more, now go back and capture the same action as the first few shots showing the waves size and I think you will have a winner. Sat could be really good up your way so go shoot if you have the time. |
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DannWunderlich Registered: Oct 08, 2007 Total Posts: 2440 Country: United States |
f10? f20? |
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Rags Hef Registered: May 03, 2007 Total Posts: 2415 Country: United States |
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ian408 Registered: Mar 29, 2004 Total Posts: 920 Country: United States |
I like the first and third shots. The third looks like someone I've seen there on occasion. |
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ShirleyP Registered: Oct 19, 2009 Total Posts: 121 Country: United States |
Unfortunately, I wasn't able to make it out to the coast today because I had two paying jobs. However, I did spend some time out there yesterday and here are some new images. The faster shutter speed did make them sharper but the light was overcast with constantly changing brightness. Would love comments. |
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ShirleyP Registered: Oct 19, 2009 Total Posts: 121 Country: United States |
a few more... |
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ShirleyP Registered: Oct 19, 2009 Total Posts: 121 Country: United States |
As I look at these, I'm probably still cropping too tight, but I like seeing the surfer and the amazing body language up close! |