Hows this Kite shot??
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Hawaii Surfer
Registered: Jul 15, 2008
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I think it is sick!! The sun off the board?? That is pretty crazy.. Straight out of the camera with the 7D..



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Marty Bingham
Registered: Feb 05, 2006
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Hawaii Surfer wrote:
I think it is sick!!


I guess you answered your own question.

Marty



PierreB
Registered: Feb 23, 2005
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snaptie2002 wrote:
Hawaii Surfer wrote:
I think it is sick!!


I guess you answered your own question.

Marty


+1

I don't think you need anyone here to confirm that this is a great shot.



Hawaii Surfer
Registered: Jul 15, 2008
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Thanks,,, But I know i like it.. do you guys??



Tim Hallam
Registered: Jul 13, 2009
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The composition is a little bland, but I'm not complaining... You don't see me out there in the water shooting this.

I think you should experiment with a few differnt crops to see if you can improve the composition. Also, post it a bit smaller... It's hard to appreciate the image when I have to scroll up and down to see it all. Plus, I'm viewing this on a 24" monitor, so the image is definitely excessively large.

Nice capture, but I think it could be improved.

Tim



livin4lax09
Registered: Oct 17, 2005
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definitely could be improved in PP, but pretty sweet image to start with!



Anthony Labbe
Registered: Dec 03, 2007
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Agree with all....

I'd look at what crop... just moving the screen sixe to faux crop it I think I'd like it more without the sun fully in there.
Sun just comming into frame at top left of the crop and around about 4x6



skyvan
Registered: Oct 29, 2009
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I agree with Anthony I think if you crop just slightly above the middle towards the bottom right. .The whole sun is extremely distracting but I think this shot could be absolutely amazing with the right crop.



davalan
Registered: Apr 15, 2006
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Happy accident or intentional, it's a cracker!



Hawaii Surfer
Registered: Jul 15, 2008
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It happened by total accident.. I am open to all suggestions.. If you want to crop it the way you see fit, then go for it. I would appreciate it...



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any better??


skyvan
Registered: Oct 29, 2009
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That does look better. Maybe just a shot of it in the air. I played around with some crops of it and to me it seems that it is best in a landscape orientation cropped to include the flare off the board and just a tiny corner of the sun in it.



Mixed
Registered: Mar 07, 2009
Total Posts: 17
Country: Australia

As photo goes it's pretty good, the sunlight reflecting off the board and catching the water is pretty cool.
Looking at it critically as 'kiteboarding' photo, I think it is lacking in composition, you can't tell if the kiter is hooked-in or unhooked (which is a big deal in kiteing) and the kite is flying upwards not forward (again a big deal in kiteing). Those are very technical aspects of kiteing that make a big different to the riding experence and hence to the images that portray the sport, sorry I can't explain it better, it's a kiter thing.
If you get a chance to flick through a kiteboarding magazine you'll see that majority of the ads and photo galleries will have a clearly unhooked rider with kite flying forward.
Still a great photo. Hope you didn't get your gear wet.



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