2010 Toyota Yaris S - Take a look!
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Nike SBd
Registered: Apr 29, 2009
Total Posts: 119
Country: United States

So when I first edited this shot I didn't really like it, but I thought it had some potential and went back in and brought out certain areas to make it more interesting... now I think I dig it. Questions/Comments?

I decided to add a blog post with the whole image build if anyone is interested in seeing before/after.

Edit - I moved a couple of color edits to the top, these are the final four, let me know which one you like best... I kept #2 at the same spot and the last one is named #5 since that's what number it was in my first edit post
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papageno
Registered: Jul 03, 2003
Total Posts: 3406
Country: United States

Try it with very dark pavement.....

Could use the white thing as a billboard/type balloon...........



sirimiri
Registered: Dec 10, 2007
Total Posts: 2430
Country: United States

1. The car looks crookedly placed, as in, the image subject is mis-aligned. It doesn't look sufficiently level, nor is it crooked enough to be "dynamic"

2. Though I personally like the red on red as a color concept, for me there is insufficient foreground/background separation

3. If you're going to shoot the vehicle earnestly, remove the plate and associated holder

4. could you pop a remote flash or strobe inside the car, to lighting up or somehow provoke interest in the interior? Pure black-out isn't that compelling for me.

5. the white square - perhaps it's best blank, but this seems like some branding of a sort could go there?

That's about as "harsh" and "honest" as I can probably get. Overall I like this image quite a bit.



Nike SBd
Registered: Apr 29, 2009
Total Posts: 119
Country: United States

updated first post



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