Treman State Park + Revision
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teked
Registered: Sep 06, 2006
Total Posts: 4397
Country: United States

After leaving the New England area this fall, we ventured to the Finger Lakes area of NY.

Treman State Park is situated on the outskirts of Ithaca. It offers numerous waterfalls in beautiful surroundings. This particular scene is adjacent to the site of an old gristmill, as the water was used for its main source of power.

Hope you enjoy.



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Revision (Less Sharpening). Any better?


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Cheers,
Ed



Binh Ly
Registered: Feb 24, 2007
Total Posts: 3042
Country: United States

very nice ed, i didn't make it to here this time. it has a painterly look probably because the leaves are sharp!



Ray Still
Registered: Oct 10, 2008
Total Posts: 8050
Country: United States

Ed

Beautiful image really like the multiple Falls and the zig zag you have captured here. Very nice choice of shutter speed as you have some very nice detail in the flowing water, nice work here Ed.

Ray Still



rpope
Registered: Oct 31, 2003
Total Posts: 3446
Country: United States

Your treatment of the water is fabulous, the leaves a great detail and the greenery finish off an excellent piece of work.

Rich



Zeph
Registered: Jan 30, 2005
Total Posts: 4574
Country: United States

A very well composed shot Ed, and as said, has great flow and is nicely exposed for the best motion. I'm sure printed this would a super shot, here it's a tad over sharpened, imho.



alichty
Registered: Jan 19, 2009
Total Posts: 8815
Country: United States

Great scene and comp and it looks like a nice exposure but the sharpening is pretty far over the top as I see this on my monitor.

Alan



ScaryFox
Registered: Dec 30, 2004
Total Posts: 24454
Country: United Kingdom

I must agree, it is seems very much oversharpened to a point where you lose the richness of the colours. The scene is great, must a bit less would be more here.
Ute



mike717
Registered: May 02, 2004
Total Posts: 6364
Country: United States

Beautiful comp Ed. The water looks great but I have to agree on the over sharpening.

Mike



teked
Registered: Sep 06, 2006
Total Posts: 4397
Country: United States

I have posted a revision that I hope corrected the over sharpening problem. I edited that using my laptop. And, I thought that it might be kind of iffy.

Please let me know if it looks better.

Thanks for all the help on this.

Cheers,
Ed



hugh
Registered: Jan 09, 2002
Total Posts: 29225
Country: United States

Hello Ed, a nice, contained scene. A suggestion on sharpening - view at 200%, click Preview off and on as you increase sharpening in small steps, when you just begin to see a difference the image is sharpened enough for the web.

hugh



Zeph
Registered: Jan 30, 2005
Total Posts: 4574
Country: United States

YES!
Much better Ed!



bshamilton
Registered: Aug 28, 2005
Total Posts: 34181
Country: United States

Yes, much nicer. Lovely scene!

Barry



kschweichhart
Registered: Jan 07, 2006
Total Posts: 4609
Country: Austria

The water looks like fluid lead, it suits well to the intense green.
Karl



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