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phatnev Registered: Nov 04, 2005 Total Posts: 1491 Country: United States |
![]() Walking out of the tunnel at the Petersen Event Center in Pittsburgh. I went into the game wanting one "iconic" image, as everyone gets the shots of him dominating on the floor so when I saw this I was pleased. C&C welcome. |
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skyvan Registered: Oct 29, 2009 Total Posts: 1081 Country: United States |
Sweet shot, it would've been cooler if the stands were actually filled but on the top of the frame, but that is out of your control. This is a great shot and I think you clearly accomplished what you were wanting to with an iconic image. |
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sutegrat Registered: Jun 05, 2008 Total Posts: 210 Country: Canada |
I'm a little torn on this one. Being not much of a basketball fan, I do know who James is and his caliber of player. |
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phatnev Registered: Nov 04, 2005 Total Posts: 1491 Country: United States |
sutegrat wrote: |
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Jonathan Knight Registered: Aug 05, 2006 Total Posts: 2312 Country: United States |
Definitely lose the guy on the far right. I don't mind him not interacting with fans. I think it's a fairly solid shot overall. I wish the extraneous people on the floor were gone (the dudes on the left and guy in the sweater on the right) |
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Russ Isabella Registered: Jan 30, 2005 Total Posts: 8739 Country: United States |
phatnev: It's a cool shot, but I can't agree with your assessment. First off, we all know it doesn't necessarily take 'focus' to ignore a bunch of hands reaching for you. Second, there's nothing in this shot that suggests James is 'focused.' For all we know, he's reading a newspaper, twittering, or signing an autograph. All we can see is that his back is turned to us, he appears to be standing still, and he is looking ahead in a somewhat downward trajectory, possibly toward his hands, which are in front of him. I agree with Paul's suggestion that a vertical crop to eliminate the distractions on the left and right of the frame might be worth a try. |
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Tim Speciale Registered: Jul 21, 2004 Total Posts: 5787 Country: United States |
That's how you photograph $43,000,000 a year. |
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DannWunderlich Registered: Oct 08, 2007 Total Posts: 2444 Country: United States |
From a photoJ perspective i think that it is a really solid shot. |
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Marty Bingham Registered: Feb 05, 2006 Total Posts: 2026 Country: United States |
phatnev wrote: |
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Scott Sewell Registered: Dec 08, 2003 Total Posts: 8305 Country: United States |
This just doesn't work for me from the standpoint it is presented...as an "iconic" image of LeBron James. I don't know how anyone would be able to tell it's LeBron without you telling us. Honestly, it could just as easily be Carmello Anthony in a Cavs outfit for all we know (in fact, that's who I would guess it was if I didn't know better!). |
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Steve Ickes Registered: Mar 24, 2007 Total Posts: 1609 Country: United States |
Good idea that just didn't work for me. As Scott pointed out it just cannot be considered an "iconic" image without being able to identify who the player is. And as Russ already pointed out, it's a bit of a stretch to say he's so focused on the game since there's nothing in the photo to suggest that. |
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phatnev Registered: Nov 04, 2005 Total Posts: 1491 Country: United States |
I appreciate all the responses everyone. I don't think it's the greatest photo I've taken, or has been taken of Lebron nor do I think that it falls flat on its face. I'd probably give it a 7 out of 10. There are things I would've loved to have changed, but this is what I came home with, and honestly, I'm almost positive it's better than anything anyone else that was there got, I'd much rather this than a photo of LBJ dunking. |
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Scott Sewell Registered: Dec 08, 2003 Total Posts: 8305 Country: United States |
Well...uh...hmm...okay then. It would seem that not only does "iconic" image mean different things to different people, so does "C&C". |
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skyvan Registered: Oct 29, 2009 Total Posts: 1081 Country: United States |
I dissagree with the others, I don't think a vertical crop would add to this shot, though I feel that a tigher horizontal oriented crop (maintaining the same orientation and ratio) would be better suited. It would allow you to eliminate some of the empty stands and the silhouette on the right. Again...I agree that it is to each is own but I think this is a better shot than most people are giving it credit for. I being a basketball fan would've told you it is Lebron immediately just based on the back of the head and the headband so I dont think the lack of a face detracts. However I do think if this was the same shot except you had been firing strobes or something from the tunnel and had him silhouetted coming out of the tunnel it would've been a better shot, but that wouldn't be a photojournalistc shot as much as it would be a portrait or promotional shot, not something for editorial use. |
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Russ Isabella Registered: Jan 30, 2005 Total Posts: 8739 Country: United States |
It's great that you feel as strongly about your image as you do. I also applaud you for thinking outside the box and trying something different. It's a cool shot. But what does it tell you that responses in the sports corner are very different from those in the people forum? It's a sports image. You've received responses from quite a number of very good sports photographers, some of whom have been doing this for a long time. Listen. Believing might also be helpful. You're attached to this shot. Understandable. Those of us who weren't there, didn't take the shot and don't have the emotional connection to it you seem to have appear not to see it as you do. You state: ".....seems a bit rich, as does "For all we know, he's reading a newspaper, twittering, or signing an autograph." because as far as I know professional athletes don't often read newspapers coming out of the tunnel." and this highlights just one area in which your photo does not tell the story. He does not appear to be "coming out of the tunnel." There is no movement implied by your photo. The guy with Cleveland on his back is just standing there, as are the people to the right and left, who, by your criteria, are just as focused as he is. |
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P Alesse Registered: Dec 25, 2004 Total Posts: 10304 Country: United States |
Get a few more hands reaching on the right, get rid of the guys standing around in the tunnel, center LeBron in the tunnel and looking up a bit more and I think you'd be onto something. |
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Harry Hoffman Registered: May 04, 2009 Total Posts: 352 Country: United States |
Nice "almost got it" shot that I would be more than happy with. |
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phatnev Registered: Nov 04, 2005 Total Posts: 1491 Country: United States |
I was just providing the other side of the coin, why I like it. I can feel strongly about an image I don't think is a 10/10. |
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Scott Sewell Registered: Dec 08, 2003 Total Posts: 8305 Country: United States |
Glad you like the image. Guess that's what matters most in this instance. |
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phatnev Registered: Nov 04, 2005 Total Posts: 1491 Country: United States |
Yeah, I will continue to post. Think I might be shooting Pitt ND football next weekend, which is probably my weakest sport. But Pitt basketball is gearing up quickly and I'll be covering a few of those games, this was my "warm up" for the season. I mainly shoot weddings these days to pay the bills, but I work for the school paper too when I have time which is how I shot this. |