BIF C&C and PP help
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tommose
Registered: Jun 24, 2009
Total Posts: 275
Country: United States

Here's a photo of some lesser yellowlegs in flight I recently took. I feel something's wrong with it (too dark) and I'd like both some C&C, as well as any PP suggestions you might have.

Thanks!



Mister Bean
Registered: Jan 30, 2007
Total Posts: 483
Country: United States



This image is copyrighted by the owner




My steps:
1. Used the auto tone adjustment - sometimes it works, so I'll start with it and see.
2. Converted to B&W.
3. Cropped.


sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
Total Posts: 12716
Country: United States

A bit under-exposed and soft.
Better with some cropping to a panoramic format, eliminating some of the distraction on top.
Could use a bit of cloning out bits in the water and/or dust on your sensor.
A bit of curves, a lot of sharpening (over-done on a small jpeg, but you get the idea), bump saturation of the water, decreased luminosity of water.
Bump of overall saturation, vibrance.

Checked your EXIF. What lens is this?
I am surprised the image is soft.

Scott



tommose
Registered: Jun 24, 2009
Total Posts: 275
Country: United States

It's a 100-400L IS lens. It was shot on a cloudy day from a moving vehicle (an airboat).



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4922
Country: New Zealand

I'd suggest using Image>Adjustments>Shadow/Highlights and bumping the shadow sliders a little. Also some Smart Sharpen (to avoid sharpening halos), a little yellow to the Color Balance, a Vibrance and Saturation bump, and a small Contrast bump:



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4922
Country: New Zealand

Tom, here's a sequence that should produce a fairly similar result. Follow the eight steps (several posts) using PS CS4. The first image shows the final panel. The second the first change to the image. The third is the sharpening step. The remainder are adjustment layers. BTW, there's nothing special about the sequence, it's just how I got the posted results. If another sequence works better, go for it.



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4922
Country: New Zealand

And then the following adjustment layers:



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
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And ....



Jo Dilbeck
Registered: Dec 20, 2007
Total Posts: 1910
Country: United States

Karen - thanks for posting those steps, it's simply amazing what changes can be made to rescue such a photo. I too strugle with BIF, using the 100-400 lens, mostly with getting the darn AF point in the right place to begin with!

Jo



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4922
Country: New Zealand

Thanks, Jo. I'm not a PS expert by any stretch of the imagination, and it's always better to start with strong images, but with some effort PS can mine an amazing amount of photo goodness from what might otherwise be disappointing images.



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