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ScaryFox
Registered: Dec 30, 2004
Total Posts: 24454
Country: United Kingdom

This is my favourite from a studio shoot that we did at the weekend. I am very new to studio work and would appreciate some feedback.
Thanks, Ute



Gene Schilling
Registered: Aug 22, 2007
Total Posts: 361
Country: Canada

There should be some fill on the lower half of the guitar, the blacks are clipping and therefore losing signficant detail. Also, your logo in the bottom right draws the eye away from the guitar. Nice exposure on the face.



HJ_Mayes
Registered: Mar 21, 2009
Total Posts: 356
Country: United States

Some light thrown onto the BG may separate him and the instrument from it. It would give some depth to the image. I like the sunglasses in the shot - nice touch.



ScaryFox
Registered: Dec 30, 2004
Total Posts: 24454
Country: United Kingdom

Thanks for your help here, that is much appreciated!
Ute



Steady Hand
Registered: Dec 03, 2007
Total Posts: 13713
Country: United States

Hi Ute,

I think you did pretty good for being new at studio work.

The pose is not bad, the light on the skin is not bad, I can see the man separated from the BG and the full figure is shown.

Not bad.

We all learn by trying.

Good to see you posting here in the People forum too.



ScaryFox
Registered: Dec 30, 2004
Total Posts: 24454
Country: United Kingdom

Thanks, Steady. I always enjoy your feedback.
Yes, lots to learn but we all start somewhere!
Ute



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