Hallowmoon + Revision(New)
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teked
Registered: Sep 06, 2006
Total Posts: 4397
Country: United States

Late yesterday, I ventured back to the park near my home to capture the last glimpse of color in our area. Unfortunately, I will be away for work during the next three weeks. When I return, it will have disappeared.

As I was on my way out of the park, I noticed the rising moon of Halloween eve.

Here is what it looked like.

Hope you enjoy.



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Modified with more contrast (Simon suggestion), and a bit more sharpening.



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New Revision:


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I have often noticed a degradation of images once I post them to my server. Does anyone else experience this?

Please let me know which one you prefer.

Cheers,
Ed


nilo4fm
Registered: Mar 26, 2009
Total Posts: 513
Country: Greece

You captures some beautiful light here Ed. I love the feel of it. Great coloring especially with these bright reds. Comp works great too.

Nikos



parsons
Registered: Mar 29, 2004
Total Posts: 5052
Country: United Kingdom

nice capture, seems a little flat on contrast
dont expect much fall colour here, just had our first major autumn storm blow through!

s



bktools
Registered: Mar 23, 2002
Total Posts: 3989
Country: United States

Hi Ed,

Rich and surreal capture with great mood and colors.

Bob



Henry W
Registered: Oct 23, 2003
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I'd be tickled to have either. Great job.



Tim ONeill
Registered: Feb 06, 2003
Total Posts: 16433
Country: United States

Wonderful shot. I prefer the second one with more detail.



kschweichhart
Registered: Jan 07, 2006
Total Posts: 4609
Country: Austria

I personally like first one, Ed.
Karl



Vern Dewit
Registered: Sep 27, 2006
Total Posts: 1923
Country: Canada

Love that second one Ed!

V.



Ray Still
Registered: Oct 10, 2008
Total Posts: 8050
Country: United States

Ed

Beautiful image, sure doesn't look like any deterioration here in my book, beautiful comps with gorgeous colors and reflection and the added bonus of a gorgeous moon rise.

PS yep Mooresville is still growing sister is still there and wife and I went back there in June of this year.

Ray Still



David Leask
Registered: Nov 19, 2003
Total Posts: 25177
Country: United Kingdom


I'm having a laugh at myself Ed. I read your title so quickly I saw "Honeymoon" and when I looked at your post I'm thinking "Ok, where does the wedding fit in here". Self confessed dope!
It's a fine shot. I think you've held the exposure in the shadows really well. Either version suits me
David



hugh
Registered: Jan 09, 2002
Total Posts: 29225
Country: United States

Hello Ed, a beautiful scene and well captured. I prefer the first one. Actually, I would have said less sharpening, and the contrast increase cost you some cloud detail.

hugh



JimFox
Registered: Jan 11, 2005
Total Posts: 28736
Country: United States

Hey Ed,

Very cool work! Simon's suggestion was great, as #2 really looks good. I had thought the fall leaves area was looking muddy in #1, but you sure fixed that in #2. Now the only thing I would do is to layer mask back in the moon from the original, as it got a bit too blown out with your adjustments in #2.

Jim



alichty
Registered: Jan 19, 2009
Total Posts: 8815
Country: United States

+1 on Jim's suggestion - that combination of the sky from the first and the trees and waters from the second would be a killer image.

Nice work.

Alan



bshamilton
Registered: Aug 28, 2005
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Country: United States

The first for me, Ed. I prefer the more subdued light and hues of the evening. JMHO
I absolutely love the shot, btw. Wonderful color and the moon truly adds a delightful touch to the scene.

Barry



teked
Registered: Sep 06, 2006
Total Posts: 4397
Country: United States

Thanks to all for great input. It's always appreciated. I am on the road for the next few weeks, and will play around with this when I get back home.

Cheers,
Ed



jsuro
Registered: Jun 09, 2005
Total Posts: 7282
Country: United States

Great image! I would go in between the two or.., when you increase the contrast make that layer a luminosity layer so that the colors don't over saturate. Excellent work.

Jose



dswiger
Registered: Feb 24, 2006
Total Posts: 4399
Country: United States

I am partial to the first one.
The less-sharp look better fits the great pastels, especially in the reflection

Dan



Chris Tylko
Registered: Nov 04, 2007
Total Posts: 633
Country: Canada

I prefer the first image as well.

Moreover, I'd crop out (or clone out) the reflection of the moon, I find the two moons compete for my attention whereas just the one moon makes for a more tranquil image.



Binh Ly
Registered: Feb 24, 2007
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Country: United States

ed, looks like you timed it nicely, #1 is for me!



ScaryFox
Registered: Dec 30, 2004
Total Posts: 24454
Country: United Kingdom

That is a beautiful capture. I am also between 1 and 2 for contrast and colours. The second seems a little over the top. I love the mood you caught here.
Ute



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