Rough glam
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Ole Martin
Registered: Aug 28, 2007
Total Posts: 319
Country: Norway

A glam shot I did yesterday =)



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Hope you like it, c&c appriciated.

You can view a bw version and a warmer one at my blog http://blogg.cruelphotography.com =)


Mr. Malik
Registered: Sep 13, 2009
Total Posts: 1293
Country: Canada

Love the way the light hits her face and body.

Solid



Jim Rickards
Registered: Dec 02, 2003
Total Posts: 7955
Country: Canada

I like it. I think you could post it a bit bigger so my weak eyes....

I don't understand the black area in the triangle of her right arm. My sense is this should be lit like the background just outside of her arm. Or is she that close to the wall and the light is blocked by her arm? Anyway, its a bit small so I couldn't tell. The black hair is against a black wall area too, and it might have been better with the lit wall behind that feature.
I like the lighting and the face being brighter that the other areas.



Ole Martin
Registered: Aug 28, 2007
Total Posts: 319
Country: Norway

Thanks for the comments..

The black area is a shadow created by her, yes. She is leaning back on the wall, so she is very close to it ;=)

Ill post it bigger when I create the gallery for the model to see, this is just from my blog :P



fstop212
Registered: Jul 30, 2004
Total Posts: 2766
Country: United States

nice lighting and shot.



ozpall
Registered: Oct 21, 2009
Total Posts: 317
Country: United States

agree, i love the colors on this image.



Ole Martin
Registered: Aug 28, 2007
Total Posts: 319
Country: Norway

thanks =) glad you liked the shots of her.. Ill post up a few more when Im finished editing, later tonight =)



the supernige
Registered: Oct 20, 2009
Total Posts: 71
Country: United States

I like it. I would like to see it pulled in a little. I don't find her thighs in jeans that interesting. Nice job.



Saad Syed
Registered: Jan 24, 2007
Total Posts: 2914
Country: United States

What was your lighting setup like? I really love your lighting technique.



jfinite
Registered: Aug 18, 2007
Total Posts: 7066
Country: United States

Hmm, don't really like the pose here.



Pandacat
Registered: Feb 02, 2005
Total Posts: 1113
Country: United States

Agree with Justin. Something about "Up Against The Wall" and the tats on her wrists makes it look like ... hope she isn't Jewish.

I really hope that crap on her arms isn't real.



Tony Brown
Registered: Nov 14, 2007
Total Posts: 1528
Country: N/A

the type of pose isn't bad, but little tweaks would have made the image much stronger. i really like the lighting.

1. IMO, if the legs would have be crossed, it would given her a more shapely hip/figure instead of a straight on tom boy look.

2. also lower one shoulder slight would have added a nicer angle to the upper body.

3. if the hands were slight closer together would have connect the pose together..

the way she is set up is too "square".



Ole Martin
Registered: Aug 28, 2007
Total Posts: 319
Country: Norway

@fstop212, thanks =)

@saadsyed, just one medium sized softbox up aimed almost at me, so just the sidelight is hitting her =)

@pandacat i dont really get it? you dont hope her chinese tattoo with her childrens name on is real ?

@tony, thanks for the good comment.

I agree on 1. and 2. but not really one nr 3 =) I normally do more lean and hips on these type of poses, but I think this one makes her look very lean, even if it doesnt emphasize her feminine curves as much as it perhaps should =)



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