Church Window (photo added, come play)
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sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
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Thoughts?

Thx
Scott



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
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I'd correct the barrel distortion and at least some of the upper and lower exposure difference (vignetting, cropped?).

To my eyes there's something slightly off about the color balance, perhaps a difference between highlight and shadow color balance, although it's small. Here's a version with some barrel correction and some minor tweaks, although I'm not satisfied with the color balance because it picked up some color fringe. As such it's mainly to suggest barrel distortion correction.

Better?



Bob Jarman
Registered: Feb 04, 2007
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I agree with AuntiPode - it would be interesting to see the same view but from the interior of the church.

Bob



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
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There is a certain documentary aspect the way these compositions are made.
Frontal, sharp, colorful and bright. Mainly frontal, flat and flat. I am undecided
if I like it.

Somehow nowadays I look forward to be surprised, even messed with visually.
Usually that entails many elements at play.






Mister Bean
Registered: Jan 30, 2007
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I love it.

Maybe fix the distortions, and center the window a little more. Then print it.



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
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Thx, folks.
Just got CS4. Now I need to learn how to correct barrel distortion, and maybe one or two other things
Thx for working on it, Karen. Improved.

Mister Bean, glad you liked it (and more)

Scott



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
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Distortion correction is easy:

1) Select All
2) Filter>Distort>Lens Correction
3) Use Remove Distortion slider



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
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D'Oh!



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
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I enjoy my 24-105 mm Canon, but it has plenty of barrel distortion at the 24 mm end. The Lens Correction filter is a great blessing.



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
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OK, still not satisfied with the original and corrections, so what about this?

Feel free to post your own variations.

Scott



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
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For some reason it reminds me of finger painting.



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
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Kudos for creativity. Looks crispy to me.



1MoreFord
Registered: Jun 12, 2006
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sbeme wrote:

... Just got CS4. Now I need to learn how to correct barrel distortion ...

Scott


Cheat - like I do
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