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DownEaster Registered: Oct 01, 2008 Total Posts: 54 Country: United States |
I just threw the Olympus part on their to make it interesting ![]() 2. ![]() 3. ![]() 4. Missed focus a tad but liked it anyway. ![]() 5. ![]() 6. ![]() 7. ![]() 8. ![]() 9. ![]() -- God Bless, BRAD |
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Lee Wiren Registered: Nov 22, 2007 Total Posts: 594 Country: United States |
2, 6, & 9 do it for me, all are nice, but those were the standouts on first look. What lens were you using, these don't look like the 50/2. OM 50/1.8 and 135/2.8 by any chance? Nice to see another Oly shooter on here. |
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DownEaster Registered: Oct 01, 2008 Total Posts: 54 Country: United States |
Greetings to another Olympus user |
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j.curtis Registered: May 02, 2004 Total Posts: 6837 Country: United States |
Over-all pretty good. Exact same expression in every shot though. |
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Charles Loy Registered: May 04, 2004 Total Posts: 1251 Country: United States |
Nice photos, but agree she has a same look in all. 2 and 9 are the better of the lot |
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Voula Registered: Aug 31, 2009 Total Posts: 76 Country: United States |
I think the first one would have benefited with a little more fill flash to brighten up her eyes, because they seem a little dark. Also, the last 2, I am not a big fan of the background, it reminds me of the school portraits from the 80's with the funky backdrops. |
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DownEaster Registered: Oct 01, 2008 Total Posts: 54 Country: United States |
Thanks for the critique eveyone. Posing/Facial expression is certainly my weak area. I need A LOT more practice with that stuff. Any suggestions on the best way to learn that kind of thing? Or is simply doing it more often the best option? My background in the last two is a little old school for sure. I was pressed a bit for space and time and that was the best I could come up with along with the High key kind of stuff. Is muslin the way most people go these days? Any suggestions for today's teens? I'd definitely like to have a better backdrop system when the space eventually allows. |
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squareeyez Registered: Jan 22, 2006 Total Posts: 1230 Country: United States |
Just curious - how was the interaction between her and you? I'm wondering about her smile - it is carbon copy in each photo, which are pretty nice, BTW. One time my wife had some Hollywood pictures taken or whatever the heck they were but she got a free sitting for me, too. Digital was just out, if that tell you anything. There was absolutely no chemistry between me and the photographer at all. Nothing. I get along fairly well with men and women but this guy and i we had nothing going on. The shoot suffered from it, I believe. Then again, I'm not a model... Sorry!! I digressed! I'm just wondering if she was distracted, stressed, nervous or whatever during the shoot? |
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DownEaster Registered: Oct 01, 2008 Total Posts: 54 Country: United States |
I thought the interaction was good but I do think she was a bit nervous. Of course I was too since the posing side of things is weak for me. She basically left all of it up to me in telling her what to do. Like many shoots, we relaxed more as the time went by, unfortunately I just didn't get anymore creative. I kind of focused on a few key elements I had been reading about prior to the shoot and didn't really get beyond that. I didn't post all of the pics and there are a few that are "slightly" different |
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SJMD Registered: Nov 13, 2004 Total Posts: 15290 Country: United States |
the first 3 are very nice, agree about the eyes in one. |
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sprocket87 Registered: Apr 25, 2006 Total Posts: 184 Country: United States |
#6 is really cool! Great idea with that chair, where'd you come up with that? Really nice. |
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DownEaster Registered: Oct 01, 2008 Total Posts: 54 Country: United States |
The chair was inspired by similar shots I've seen different places (I think one was for a musicians CD sleeve). It's kind of funny actually. I had scouted the place to take this photo and thought to myself it was too bad that I didn't have an old chair I could use. About 15 minutes later, I was running errands and at one of my stops, this chair was sitting outside for sale with a matching couch |
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jfinite Registered: Aug 18, 2007 Total Posts: 7352 Country: United States |
Nice shots, well done. I believe most of the nits have been picked. |
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Weiyang Liu Registered: Sep 17, 2006 Total Posts: 843 Country: Canada |
As others have already mentioned, it's the exact same expression and face angle in every shot. It looks good but not when it's all the same. Was the a case of you finding her best angle then choosing to only photograph that or was it a case where she would always default to this pose? (i.e. the autopose) |
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jprezant Registered: May 19, 2006 Total Posts: 7804 Country: United States |
the outdoor shots are nice. the indoor shots |
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DownEaster Registered: Oct 01, 2008 Total Posts: 54 Country: United States |
Woo Hoo! I've moved up a decade! |
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markj675 Registered: Aug 02, 2009 Total Posts: 7 Country: United States |
nice eyes, lot look good, # 8 has the most natural facial expression, i tend to try to talk to the person tho try to get some natural reaction, |
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fstop212 Registered: Jul 30, 2004 Total Posts: 2859 Country: United States |
#6 is great. Nice job on all |