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Littlefield Registered: Jan 03, 2006 Total Posts: 818 Country: United States |
![]() Would y'all take out the masts in the lower left corner or leave them ? Thanks Don |
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Littlefield Registered: Jan 03, 2006 Total Posts: 818 Country: United States |
Greg ,thanks for responding . Yea, you are right it will look better if they are cloned out . |
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sbeme Registered: Dec 23, 2003 Total Posts: 11891 Country: United States |
Boat feels lost among the others and is too centered in the frame. I'm not sure about your shooting options, but I'd like to see the sailboat larger. As shot, I'd crop quite a bit from the top and right, placing the boat in the right third and creating a pano crop. Then I'd clone out the parts of the boats at the left edge and left corner of the frame. |
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Littlefield Registered: Jan 03, 2006 Total Posts: 818 Country: United States |
Actually the light was like that and I placed the boat in the center on purpose but I appreciate the comments. |
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sbeme Registered: Dec 23, 2003 Total Posts: 11891 Country: United States |
it's amazing how much water colors can vary |
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Littlefield Registered: Jan 03, 2006 Total Posts: 818 Country: United States |
The light was awesome that night at Mt Battie looking down on Camden almost a purplish hue in the air. |
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sbeme Registered: Dec 23, 2003 Total Posts: 11891 Country: United States |
Ah, back to Camden! |
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Kaden K. Registered: Mar 14, 2008 Total Posts: 3130 Country: United States |
Nice. I would tighten up that composition and improve overall treatment of the image. |
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Littlefield Registered: Jan 03, 2006 Total Posts: 818 Country: United States |
sbeme wrote: |
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Littlefield Registered: Jan 03, 2006 Total Posts: 818 Country: United States |
Kaden K. wrote: |
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Kaden K. Registered: Mar 14, 2008 Total Posts: 3130 Country: United States |
Let me exemplify. |
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Littlefield Registered: Jan 03, 2006 Total Posts: 818 Country: United States |
Sure I would like to look at what you propose . |
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Kaden K. Registered: Mar 14, 2008 Total Posts: 3130 Country: United States |
Ok, so this is a fast and dirty clean up with PS. Not the best idea obviously. |
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Littlefield Registered: Jan 03, 2006 Total Posts: 818 Country: United States |
Your color is way too purple and the color of the water in my picture is as it was. But I appreciate your attempt. |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 4576 Country: New Zealand |
I find the central location of the red yacht a bit dull, but if you like, obviously you want it there. Given what you want for the image, I'd suggest cloning out all masts without complete boats and all the unattached mooring buoys, partial boats, white specs around the entrance and perhaps the channel marker above the red yacht. That should reduce the clutter. |
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Littlefield Registered: Jan 03, 2006 Total Posts: 818 Country: United States |
This photo was taken at almost dark so the the buoys are how the picture was seen and this was a long ways away with a 200mm . |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 4576 Country: New Zealand |
It depends upon your intent. If you lean towards straight reportage you must keep what's there, warts and all. If you lean towards art, what matters is the result. |
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Littlefield Registered: Jan 03, 2006 Total Posts: 818 Country: United States |
Yea with LR and raw I have the latitude to do both |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 4576 Country: New Zealand |
For some value of both.... |