Half Dome in Half-tone
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nrferguson
Registered: Apr 20, 2004
Total Posts: 849
Country: United Kingdom

Well, not exactly but critiques on the landscape forum said this was asking to be converted to B&W so here its.
C&C welcomed
Niall



tomandmarj
Registered: Jan 02, 2007
Total Posts: 5800
Country: United States

unique shooting of that old rock. I like the composition, but the contrast is weak;
brighter whites would really add drama to your image.
regards, tom



Todd Warnke
Registered: Sep 04, 2006
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Country: United States

+1. I really like the comp.

Peace,

Todd



Mr. Malik
Registered: Sep 13, 2009
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Epic



weil16
Registered: Jul 23, 2003
Total Posts: 525
Country: United States

Niall,

This is a great shot and great composition. What did you use for B&W conversion ? you should try to make the clouds pop a little more... this is a great pic but I think it has even greater potential.



nrferguson
Registered: Apr 20, 2004
Total Posts: 849
Country: United Kingdom

I use an action called B&WMF followed by detoning but I, too am not very pleased with it and will have another try.



eric kim
Registered: Apr 04, 2007
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Contrast looks a bit dull, and it is much too centered for me.

ek



nrferguson
Registered: Apr 20, 2004
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Country: United Kingdom

OK, here's a simpler conversion with levels played with to boost the whites. Any better?



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
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mind if I give it a try?
want to send the RAW or a larger file in color?

Scott



nrferguson
Registered: Apr 20, 2004
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Country: United Kingdom

With thanks to Scott Goetz for this conversion which certainly has more "wow!" factor



lazlo369
Registered: Mar 01, 2004
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I like the tonal range in the last one the most, but the bigger size that you posted as the second picture would benefit the image.



jerryreed
Registered: Dec 20, 2004
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I am think ing that the central placement of the subject might not be the strongest composition from this POV.

Jerry



hk_mtbr
Registered: Jun 23, 2009
Total Posts: 635
Country: United States

I like the work on the last one a lot.

And I like the composition. It is a different take on half dome and it strongly divides the sediment side (right) vs. rocky crags (left). Note: I'm not a geologist



mrchile
Registered: Oct 28, 2009
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Country: United States

I think the image is strong enough with it's composition, but I wouldn't mind seeing a little more of the rock on the left. A panorama might have worked nicely.



mrchile
Registered: Oct 28, 2009
Total Posts: 1603
Country: United States

I think the image is strong enough with it's composition, but I wouldn't mind seeing a little more of the rock on the left. A panorama might have worked nicely.



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