Bird Opinion?
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tommose
Registered: Jun 24, 2009
Total Posts: 275
Country: United States

Could I please get an opinion on this? I did some PP and cropped it better than in the past. Thanks.

Tom



well69
Registered: May 19, 2009
Total Posts: 814
Country: Georgia

I'd like to see the bird's face a little brighter - but please take my opinion with a grain of salt.



MarcyJillGood
Registered: May 19, 2009
Total Posts: 997
Country: United States

I agree it would be nice to see more of his interesting face. I do like the backlit effect on his chest feathers - very nice!

Marcy



tommose
Registered: Jun 24, 2009
Total Posts: 275
Country: United States

Excellent. The feedback over the past weeks has been a good education for me. Thanks!



Bert DeMars
Registered: Nov 05, 2005
Total Posts: 155
Country: United States

Tom.

Great shot, nicely framed. The EXIF data doesn't show if its a RAW file. If it is, and you have the program Photomatix Pro for doing HDR work, you can pull it in as a single image and bring up a subtle increase in feather detail. Most think HDR work is about creating grunge interpretations, not so. You can improve regular images (RAW) keeping them "real".

Bert



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4922
Country: New Zealand

I like the composition and the heron's pose. A little sharper would be more appealing to me. Are you trying for a moody sunset image? If you're not sold on a dark moody look, a shadows adjustment would open up the bird, loosing much of the darkness without loosing all the mood. Also a slight middle tone dodge on the heron face might add a little interest. I can post an example to illustrate if you'd like.



newhaven
Registered: Mar 16, 2008
Total Posts: 265
Country: United States

An easy way to brighten the bird is to make a copy of the red channel, invert and blur it, and copy it to a new layer above the bird. Then change the blend mode of the new layer to overlay. Otherwise, the crop and backlighting looks nice.


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sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
Total Posts: 12716
Country: United States

Cropping is pretty good. If you could, I'd put just a bit more headroom at the top. The GBH is well-positioned in the frame.
Lighting was not optimal, but, as AuntiPode illustrated, the image can be improved in PS.
Here is a LR adjusted version with shadow recovery, slight curves work, adjustment of luminosity and saturation of blues, oranges and yellows, and a bit of added sharpening.

BTW, the back-lit feathers are a nice touch. Again, this might be a case for a bit of fill flash.

Scott



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