I threw this together for my son last night. There are a couple of things I'd like to improve upon but I thought I'd ask here for suggestions as well. I do a collage-type thing for the scouts every year, maybe next time I'll do a magazine format.

Thanks for any feedback.

Thanks Greg. Ironically, my "prototype" was the current issue of Outside magazine that happen to be sitting here at my computer. Nice one you did! Thanks for the feedback.

Its too crowded, need some white space.
I would personally also offset the kid and show more ball.

Also font is hard to read, especially with all caps.

Also play with font placement, alignment and sizes.