#66 The Kiss
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hk_mtbr
Registered: Jun 23, 2009
Total Posts: 560
Country: United States

I hope this is OK for my first MA submission as a version is posted elsewhere on the board...but I like it so here it is. And I shot it this week so I think I'm OK.

This was taken about 15 minutes prior to sunset and we, GF and I, were about 20' from the barn.



Howeird
Registered: Nov 04, 2008
Total Posts: 155
Country: United Kingdom

Hi

I like the idea, but I think a closer crop to focus more on the subject of the shadows and if you could straighten up the building may improve it.
My opinion only

Good effort anyway
Howard



hk_mtbr
Registered: Jun 23, 2009
Total Posts: 560
Country: United States

Thanks for the post...Actually I did that on a version but settled back on the "as shot" angle.

It is the third of a "series" - the first two are square but for this one I held it down in the shadow of my body. So I guess this one is more natural somehow.

Here's the other post with the first two pics. Even some dialog added by other viewers

http://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/822729/999999#lastmessage



HeWhoMust
Registered: Oct 25, 2009
Total Posts: 4
Country: United States

well done



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