Help with people photography
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joosay
Registered: May 19, 2009
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Country: United States

Hey everyone, I like to do a lot of street photography and, now that I have a decent focal reach, have started to take pictures of people, as well.

I want to improve and maybe you can give some pointers if you notice anything in the pictures below. I would appreciate it. Thanks for looking.

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T-bone1
Registered: Jun 29, 2008
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Joosay-
I'll give you my opion. Opinions may vary! All are given in a friendly tone with the intent to help.
It seems as though you've done some reading, and/or someone has told you about the rule of thirds. Some of these shots would benefit from ignoring that rule.
#1 - Too much empty space on the left, and it doesn't enhance the shot. She's a pretty girl. Give us a tight shot of her face and that pensive expression she's showing.
#2 - I find this kind of humorus. Obviously the sign isn't doing much good keeping folks out.
#3 - Not enough going on to interest me. A tighter shot of the uniformed folks would help.
#4 & #5 - That's the idea! Getting closer physically and metaphorically.
#6 - This is cool, and would be even cooler with a wider perspective. I don't know your gear limitations, however.
#7 - Sorry, just doesn't grab interest.
Again, these are opinions! I hope it helps and gives you food for thought.
-Tim



joosay
Registered: May 19, 2009
Total Posts: 894
Country: United States

Thank you!
I've been thinking that a lot of my pictures are following the two-thirds law too much. I really appreciate your opinions and will try to keep them in mind when I shoot again

I would have shot the girl the same way as #4 and 5 but there were a lot of restrictions - distance (that picture was already shot at my max 300mm on a crop camera), and people in the way.



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
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Country: United States

Joosay,
I'm pretty new to capturing candid street scenes, but that never stops me from offering my opinions....

I'm pretty much in agreement with Tim on the images.
#2 is pretty funny and a keeper
#3 has an interesting angle you are experimenting with, but not enough interaction and a bit distant from the cops
Love the processing in 4 and 5, but 4 might work better either with eye contact, or some clearer hints about what he is viewing. 5 is my favorite. I really like the processing, off centered subject, expression, quiet, non-distracting background

Scott



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
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I happen to agree in general with what Tim said except on #4 where I think you have the wrong angle.

I would also play a little bit with the treatment of the images. Here is an example:



joosay
Registered: May 19, 2009
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Thank you to all who have critique'd!

Kaden K. -
Any hints on how you achieved that effect?



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
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There are several ways to get there. I used the focus function on a plugin called
Dreamsuite. You could mask/layer for focus in PS.

This image was enhanced by isolating the girl and softening it.

Others my require different treatment including just enhancing colors. Here is another example:

Cranking up the colors makes all come alive louder.



joosay
Registered: May 19, 2009
Total Posts: 894
Country: United States

I'll look up tutorials to do some masking on PS.

Thanks.



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
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Country: United States

Good idea. I think that image works primarily because her glance connects
beautifully with the viewer. Where as the broadway image I like the colors
and the warmth you have on the original post (balanced) but isolates the
viewer from the scene. It needs to be a tad more overwhelming. Color
maybe the key there. It makes the viewer less passive.



waritw
Registered: May 27, 2009
Total Posts: 53
Country: United States

Love #6. What if you make it a bit shallower DOF?
But the busy street might be your intended shot in this picture.
It's just get a bit busy for me.



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