c&c please, bird
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vector101
Registered: Oct 05, 2008
Total Posts: 17
Country: Australia

not sure about crop, any other opinions welcome

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AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4576
Country: New Zealand

Placing the bird in the center tends to give it a static feel. For some images that works. I don't feel it is right for this one.



vector101
Registered: Oct 05, 2008
Total Posts: 17
Country: Australia

so what would you suggest, more space where? thanks



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4576
Country: New Zealand

With the current image, crop some from the right side and a little from the top. The bird should be more of the image.



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
Total Posts: 11891
Country: United States

Vector 101,
AuntiPode echoes the usual advice. Place your subject off-center, perhaps at a third (rule of thirds?). For birds, most compose to have the bird looking into or flying into the frame. Which means more space to look or fly into.
The pose shows good eye contact, a plus in animal, bird and...human photography. I wish the body hadnt been rotated away. Image would be stronger if the body and head were both parallel to the frame, with eye contract like you have captured.

Colors are beautiful, background is nicely complementary in color. Hard to tell for sure on a smaller image, but looks like you did a nice job retaining detail in the whites.

Scott



vector101
Registered: Oct 05, 2008
Total Posts: 17
Country: Australia

better? thanks for the compliments

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different angle and pose

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sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
Total Posts: 11891
Country: United States

2nd crop took from the left of the image. It would look better if instead you took from the right of the image.
Scott



JarvisJesseT
Registered: Aug 03, 2009
Total Posts: 20
Country: United States

I agree, you should have cropped off from the right leaving more scene in front of the bird.



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