Love to hear your comments and criticism.

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great series, really like #2 & #5!

I do not like the Creative - Aged Photo LR preset (or similar looking action). #5, for example, would be so much stronger as a sepia or, better still, strong BW. I enjoy the framing in #1.

2 looks uncomfortable for her, unless they were making out, in which case it's uncomfortable for us.

5 is a nice moment. They seem like a happy couple and that's coming across pretty clearly.

Why are you (consistently) so far away from them? The combination of small posted pics + distance between you & them leaves these pics a little cold to me, like something is happening that I'm not a part of.

3 is a good idea. Might brighten it a little and clone out the pole and lilly-pad-over-the-head-in-the-reflection IMHO.

Why are you (consistently) so far away from them? The combination of small posted pics + distance between you & them leaves these pics a little cold to me, like something is happening that I'm not a part of.


This is spot on. While the exposures are nice and the colors are fine overall, the set lacks a sense of intimacy and closeness, IMO.

ken

Thanks Ken and Wolf_boy. Now that you mention it, it does appear a bit voyeuristic. I do need to get closer and more intimate. Thanks all for the comments.