More fishing - Mozambique
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Oosty
Registered: Mar 09, 2009
Total Posts: 2106
Country: South Africa

Two more - C&C appreciated



Charlie Shugart
Registered: Feb 06, 2007
Total Posts: 16481
Country: United States

Oosty,
Not sure if I'd prefer these toned versions over a straight B&W, but both of these are excellent shots.
My preference is the second one because of the DOF and balance of the different elements, as well as the intrinsic benefits of three people making a triangle.
Well done.
Charlie



greswolde
Registered: May 04, 2006
Total Posts: 1221
Country: United Kingdom

i think the toning is hurting these quite a lot, its making a warm scene look very cold.

That aside i agree with charlie, the 2nd shot is nicely composed with foreground and background interest.

Cheers

Martyn



T-bone1
Registered: Jun 29, 2008
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Country: United States

+1 for maybe considering a tone change.

I still get a kick out of the giant shark fin in #1

-Tim



eric kim
Registered: Apr 04, 2007
Total Posts: 3075
Country: United States

Hey Ootsy,

As the others said adding a blue tint to it gives it a "cold" feeling... something I don't feel that is appropriate for this shot. For #1 it feels a little too spread out, Id crop a little off the right. And I am digging #2.

eric



Oosty
Registered: Mar 09, 2009
Total Posts: 2106
Country: South Africa

Thanks for the comments - the toning comes from my "playing" with the software - with hindsight I agree completely

Happy 4th everyone.



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