Model Gwenny From Belgium
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akkiewakkie
Registered: Jul 03, 2009
Total Posts: 10
Country: Belgium

Model Gwenny...
Picture 1 :
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Picture 2:
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Picture 3:
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Cory Cooper
Registered: Jan 30, 2002
Total Posts: 250
Country: United States

Beautiful captures and a stunning model.

I love the pose and the feeling of the shot, but the wrinkles under the model on the second photo are distracting to me.

C



squareeyez
Registered: Jan 22, 2006
Total Posts: 1178
Country: United States

Huh... I didn't see any wrinkles until Cory pointed it out. But I ain't mad at her!



Karl7Feet
Registered: Dec 04, 2005
Total Posts: 331
Country: United States

Beautiful model and nice photos. I agree on the wrinkles on the 2nd photo. I suggest fixing in PP the wrinkles on the white backdrop and also along her back and thigh.



Y_vdm
Registered: May 20, 2005
Total Posts: 1301
Country: Belgium

Nice model ... nice pictures, i prefer the second one



pilles
Registered: Jul 20, 2003
Total Posts: 7317
Country: United States

Cory Cooper wrote:
Beautiful captures and a stunning model.

I love the pose and the feeling of the shot, but the wrinkles under the model on the second photo are distracting to me.

C


If you felt you just had to say something, what about the wrinkles on her back?



Spyro P.
Registered: Mar 24, 2008
Total Posts: 1353
Country: Australia

I like them... they look simple but honest, well made and natural. If I was to change anything would be a little bit more air above her head in the first photo, maybe even a little wider so you have the whole hoodie in the frame. Also I thik there's a yellow stain under her belly, might wanna get rid of it. Nice work!



brucem48
Registered: Nov 16, 2008
Total Posts: 780
Country: United States

I just Booked a flight.



akkiewakkie
Registered: Jul 03, 2009
Total Posts: 10
Country: Belgium

I am glad one person is not talking about the wrinkles



Cory Cooper
Registered: Jan 30, 2002
Total Posts: 250
Country: United States

pilles wrote:
If you felt you just had to say something, what about the wrinkles on her back?

I actually don't mind those for some reason.



akkiewakkie
Registered: Jul 03, 2009
Total Posts: 10
Country: Belgium

Under the model i placed a blanket,the ground whas very cold and that are the wrinkles under Gwenny.
I know this is not a excuse but i trying not to work with pp
Sorry for my bad englisch.....



Jim Rickards
Registered: Dec 02, 2003
Total Posts: 7946
Country: Canada

Good work on these.

In #2, what I notice most is how you set the scene up. She is not just laying there, she's doing something and that makes it look real and unposed.

I noticed the wrinkles too, but then I asked myself why that would be a problem, and how distracting that is. Also, isn't it natural to have wrinkles when you lay on a fabric?

I agree with Spyro P about a bit more room above her head.

Oh, and your English is just fine. Some mistakes but it is very readable and easily understood.



ggleason
Registered: Apr 20, 2004
Total Posts: 864
Country: United States

The model is beautiful, the lighting looks good, but I do wonder what she is doing sitting in the water. Gregg



akkiewakkie
Registered: Jul 03, 2009
Total Posts: 10
Country: Belgium

ggleason wrote:
The model is beautiful, the lighting looks good, but I do wonder what she is doing sitting in the water. Gregg

Hello,"what she is doing sitting in the water" its verry hot at the moment in belgium around 90 f ,so its a plaisir to sitting in the water !!



Terrence Credl
Registered: May 28, 2007
Total Posts: 264
Country: Australia

stunning images of a stunning woman
well done Danny



akkiewakkie
Registered: Jul 03, 2009
Total Posts: 10
Country: Belgium

Terrence Credl wrote:
stunning images of a stunning woman
well done Danny

Thx Terrence Greetings from Belgium the other side of the world



akkiewakkie
Registered: Jul 03, 2009
Total Posts: 10
Country: Belgium

Terrence Credl wrote:
stunning images of a stunning woman
well done Danny

thx Terrence



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