Model Gwenny...
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Picture 2:

Picture 3:

Beautiful captures and a stunning model.

I love the pose and the feeling of the shot, but the wrinkles under the model on the second photo are distracting to me.

C

Huh... I didn't see any wrinkles until Cory pointed it out. But I ain't mad at her!

Beautiful model and nice photos. I agree on the wrinkles on the 2nd photo. I suggest fixing in PP the wrinkles on the white backdrop and also along her back and thigh.

Nice model ... nice pictures, i prefer the second one

Cory Cooper wrote:
Beautiful captures and a stunning model.

I love the pose and the feeling of the shot, but the wrinkles under the model on the second photo are distracting to me.

C

If you felt you just had to say something, what about the wrinkles on her back?

I like them... they look simple but honest, well made and natural. If I was to change anything would be a little bit more air above her head in the first photo, maybe even a little wider so you have the whole hoodie in the frame. Also I thik there's a yellow stain under her belly, might wanna get rid of it. Nice work!

I just Booked a flight.

I am glad one person is not talking about the wrinkles

pilles wrote:
If you felt you just had to say something, what about the wrinkles on her back?

I actually don't mind those for some reason.

Under the model i placed a blanket,the ground whas very cold and that are the wrinkles under Gwenny.
I know this is not a excuse but i trying not to work with pp
Sorry for my bad englisch.....

Good work on these.

In #2, what I notice most is how you set the scene up. She is not just laying there, she's doing something and that makes it look real and unposed.

I noticed the wrinkles too, but then I asked myself why that would be a problem, and how distracting that is. Also, isn't it natural to have wrinkles when you lay on a fabric?

I agree with Spyro P about a bit more room above her head.

Oh, and your English is just fine. Some mistakes but it is very readable and easily understood.

The model is beautiful, the lighting looks good, but I do wonder what she is doing sitting in the water. Gregg

ggleason wrote:
The model is beautiful, the lighting looks good, but I do wonder what she is doing sitting in the water. Gregg
Hello,"what she is doing sitting in the water" its verry hot at the moment in belgium around 90 f ,so its a plaisir to sitting in the water !!

stunning images of a stunning woman
well done Danny

Terrence Credl wrote:
stunning images of a stunning woman
well done Danny
Thx Terrence Greetings from Belgium the other side of the world

Terrence Credl wrote:
stunning images of a stunning woman
well done Danny
thx Terrence