Two Favorite shots of my Girlfriend
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FranklinRomero
Registered: Apr 29, 2009
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Country: United States

Woah, that does look much better, it does make it a stronger picture. I wish I would have gotten more of the wood behind her to make it look a little like a story telling composition rather than just stopping at her.

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one with more background... maybe/maybe not as good as I though..?

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I am guessing the first one isn't too bad...




jfinite
Registered: Aug 18, 2007
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Country: United States

Lovely lady, nice pics.



Mike Tuomey
Registered: Jul 23, 2005
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Country: United States

the proportions of the first crop are better imho, franklin. the "story" is her eyes, face, hair, skin. everything else is ... background, at least here, as i see it.

check out arnold newman and others who practice environmental portraiture for insight into using backgrounds to add depth and signification.



FranklinRomero
Registered: Apr 29, 2009
Total Posts: 302
Country: United States

Thanks so much mike for keeping up with my questions and replies! you guys here on FM are the best and actually help! I greatly appreciate it! I sure will check out Arnold Newman on Google and see what I can find... Thanks again!

Hmm, he has some interesting shots on the first portfolio that came up on Google.Those are some old pictures from the late 40's.



khanhfat
Registered: Nov 02, 2008
Total Posts: 226
Country: Vietnam

she needs to smile a bit more glad to see a houstonian here



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