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choogi
Registered: Mar 18, 2009
Total Posts: 63
Country: United States

Hi all,

I'm kind of new to photography and to this forum--this is my first non-buy/sell post. I've learned a lot from reading the other critiques and I'm now hoping you all might be able to give me some constructive criticism. This is my first but be as harsh as you want--just trying to improve

Calvin

PS any ideas for a name?



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4576
Country: New Zealand

I like it. My only suggestion would be to perhaps clone out the "I" graffiti in the upper right edge because it distracts.

Ideas for a name? You don't like Calvin? ... Oh, you mean for the image?

Maybe "Heart Strings"?



choogi
Registered: Mar 18, 2009
Total Posts: 63
Country: United States

Haha I was kind of thinking of that name but thought it might be a little cliche...maybe something like "heart chains"?



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4576
Country: New Zealand

Perhaps, "The Mailled Heart".



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
Total Posts: 3130
Country: United States

Wrapped up and ready to go.
Union Square.



JOSH GUNNET
Registered: Nov 10, 2007
Total Posts: 59
Country: United States

keeping love together



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
Total Posts: 11891
Country: United States

I'm not sure I understand what I am seeing.
But I like the image alot. Like the processing, the vignette, the unusual subject and moderately shallow DOF.
The proposed names are great!

scott



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