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David Souch Registered: May 10, 2007 Total Posts: 5 Country: Canada |
This is my first attempt at a WA. I am thinking the first one, but would like some C&C. Thanks. ![]() Image Two ![]() Image Three ![]() |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 4565 Country: New Zealand |
The composition is a little static in all three, but I like the third, best. |
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sixgun Registered: Nov 22, 2006 Total Posts: 128 Country: United States |
The clarity on all three are exceptional, technically you have shooting flowers down! My only comment is that the crops are a bit too tight... back off and let a little of the background through, and don't center the subject into the frame as much. #2 is the best as far as comp, but its still crowded on the right side. Also - a little vignette to draw the eye to the subject might be appropriate here.. (although I tend not to overdue vignettes, it might make sense here..) The third is my fave - the texture and shadow detail is awesome! |
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David Souch Registered: May 10, 2007 Total Posts: 5 Country: Canada |
Thanks. Originally I was leaning towards the third shot. Think I will loosen the crop and go with it. |
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pcimaging Registered: Jan 25, 2004 Total Posts: 1154 Country: United States |
As shots of beautiful blossoms, these are excellent. The color and detail is impressive. As a photo per se, I would just agree that you need a bit more room around the subjects. |