Which do you prefer?
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David Souch
Registered: May 10, 2007
Total Posts: 5
Country: Canada

This is my first attempt at a WA. I am thinking the first one, but would like some C&C. Thanks.

Image One



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Image Two



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Image Three



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AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 1741
Country: New Zealand

The composition is a little static in all three, but I like the third, best.



sixgun
Registered: Nov 22, 2006
Total Posts: 95
Country: United States

The clarity on all three are exceptional, technically you have shooting flowers down! My only comment is that the crops are a bit too tight... back off and let a little of the background through, and don't center the subject into the frame as much. #2 is the best as far as comp, but its still crowded on the right side. Also - a little vignette to draw the eye to the subject might be appropriate here.. (although I tend not to overdue vignettes, it might make sense here..) The third is my fave - the texture and shadow detail is awesome!



David Souch
Registered: May 10, 2007
Total Posts: 5
Country: Canada

Thanks. Originally I was leaning towards the third shot. Think I will loosen the crop and go with it.



pcimaging
Registered: Jan 25, 2004
Total Posts: 1061
Country: United States

As shots of beautiful blossoms, these are excellent. The color and detail is impressive. As a photo per se, I would just agree that you need a bit more room around the subjects.



Scott Stoness
Registered: Sep 11, 2006
Total Posts: 5301
Country: Canada

AuntiPode wrote:
The composition is a little static in all three, but I like the third, best.


I agree that they look too centred (static). I like the first best. They are all technically (exposure, depth, sharpness) very strong.

Scott



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