#349 Lily on Bark
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DonT
Registered: May 25, 2006
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Country: United States

I really didn't like the black edge on the top left of the last post so I had to change it out one last time. I've used this tree before and I've been wanting to do some re-take anyway.

C&C Welcome



Yakim Peled
Registered: Nov 18, 2004
Total Posts: 15292
Country: Israel

I like the contradictions a lot and aesthetics are 10/10 but it just cries: It was placed thus.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



DonT
Registered: May 25, 2006
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Country: United States

Thanks Yakim and yes it does scream posed The natural light under the limbs of the tree cannot be controlled, but I do love the subtle colors in the bark and light. After this WA I know I'm bound to try it again.



Yakim Peled
Registered: Nov 18, 2004
Total Posts: 15292
Country: Israel

I love the subtle colors in the bark and the diffused light as well. That's exactly why I wrote "aesthetics are 10/10". It's a beautiful pic.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Carrol
Registered: Mar 05, 2006
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Nice light - and I LOVE the colors in the bark (intriguing!)
(I do agree that it looks placed there.)
good luck!
~ Carrol



Philly Rains
Registered: Nov 05, 2006
Total Posts: 3092
Country: United States

Hi Don! I love this 're-shoot.' Since I have a print of an early image I can compare the two, and I think this one is extra nice! Great contrast, and color. Excellent image, my friend!



Steve Spencer
Registered: Nov 08, 2006
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Country: Canada

Hi Don,

Lovely shot. I love the texture of the bark and the soft lily is a great contrast. So what if it looks placed, it is still lovely.



Strad
Registered: Aug 20, 2004
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Country: United States

Beautiful shot, Don! The varied colors and textures of the bark are quite amazing! Addressing the problem of it looking to contrived or "placed" I think a different cropping that brought the head of the Lily more into some aspect of the Rule of Thirds (maybe a landscape orientation cropping) might have helped mitigate that. Having said that, though, I don't mind this "placed" look all that much. It remains a fine shot.

All the best,

Endre



DonT
Registered: May 25, 2006
Total Posts: 896
Country: United States

Thanks everyone and I bet all of you know the feeling of having an image in your head you just can't seem to capture. This might be an opportunity for an HDR image.

Philly where the heck have you been? I missed seeing you and Vipermike posting out here.



Chad Schulz
Registered: Oct 25, 2007
Total Posts: 1494
Country: United States

Perfect composition, background, and coloring. A grand entry.

Chad



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