New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?
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Vasco
Registered: Apr 24, 2002
Total Posts: 974
Country: Portugal

Hey,
i have a new website and would love to see what the experts have to say.
I still have to organize the photos by categories but it is hard as I shoot so many different subjects.

It´s called Desfocado and it means "out of focus" in Portuguese. And yes, some of them are

Would love to hear what you think.
txs

Out of Focus



Vasco
Registered: Apr 24, 2002
Total Posts: 974
Country: Portugal

link corrected



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
Total Posts: 3256
Country: United States

Vasco gostei das tuas imagems e da tua website.
Cores, formas, e composicoes bonitinhas.



Vasco
Registered: Apr 24, 2002
Total Posts: 974
Country: Portugal

Kaden K. wrote:
Vasco gostei das tuas imagems e da tua website.
Cores, formas, e composicoes bonitinhas.

Obrigado. Where are you from ? Brasil?



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4922
Country: New Zealand

Slideshow demonstrates a superb eye for graphic elements, artfully captured. One of the best collections I've seen.



Poozer
Registered: Feb 13, 2005
Total Posts: 15
Country: United States

I love the thumbnails below the slideshow, they were carefully picked. And I entirely echo the comments of one above.



jltdarby
Registered: Mar 15, 2008
Total Posts: 14
Country: United States

Striking! Crisp, clean, linear and so graphic. Nice compositions, great colors and tones. Beautifully seen and captured images across the board. Really enjoyed the slideshow.
The only other comment I have is one that you have addressed - the need for some sort of organization. Grouping your images (even if they are only loosely related) makes it easier for the viewer to navigate your site.



Scott Stoness
Registered: Sep 11, 2006
Total Posts: 7873
Country: Canada

You have some nice pictures but it is not clear what the purpose of the website is - to show your work to friends or sell your photography. This looks like more of the former.

If selling I woudl break it up more into groups and pare the images down.

Scott



Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
Total Posts: 3256
Country: United States

Brazil?!? Nao, alfacinha na parte do pai.



steveaphoto
Registered: Apr 01, 2009
Total Posts: 24
Country: Canada

great site cool images great work. take a look at mine let me know what you think www.stevea.ca



Vasco
Registered: Apr 24, 2002
Total Posts: 974
Country: Portugal

AuntiPode wrote:
Slideshow demonstrates a superb eye for graphic elements, artfully captured. One of the best collections I've seen.

Those are some really nice words. Txs a lot.



Vasco
Registered: Apr 24, 2002
Total Posts: 974
Country: Portugal

Scott Stoness wrote:
You have some nice pictures but it is not clear what the purpose of the website is - to show your work to friends or sell your photography. This looks like more of the former.

If selling I woudl break it up more into groups and pare the images down.

Scott

You are so right about that. I MUST break them down into groups. Txs a lot for your comments



Vasco
Registered: Apr 24, 2002
Total Posts: 974
Country: Portugal

steveaphoto wrote:
great site cool images great work. take a look at mine let me know what you think www.stevea.ca


Txs Steve. I took a look at your website, and it is very good. First of all: the website itself. It is very simple and easy to navigate. I absolutely love the way the picture resizes itself when we increase or decrease the windows´ size. Very clever. How do u do that?

The photos: I particulary like the ones with the yeallow background and wood allaround, and the beauty section.
Very crisp and well lit.
Good job.



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