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Brenton Biggs
Registered: Mar 07, 2007
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This little guy was all alone. Help on the ID would be appreciated. CC is welcomed! This was shot over the summer, and wasn't sure if I liked it.



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Dave In La
Registered: Jul 07, 2006
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so glad you shared. IMO, this is a really good image.
REally evokes a feeling

you could crop off the bottom up to/near that leaf fold and I think the comp is still quite strong. Just scroll the window down off bottom of your screen and take a look



trenchmonkey
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Immature Chicken Vulture Leafhopper Tweety I give. Cute lil guy, Brenton.



Brenton Biggs
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Dave In La wrote:
so glad you shared. IMO, this is a really good image.
REally evokes a feeling

you could crop off the bottom up to/near that leaf fold and I think the comp is still quite strong. Just scroll the window down off bottom of your screen and take a look


Thanks Dave, I see what you mean, and I was thinking about doing that before, I think I'll crop it right above that lilly on the bottom.



Brenton Biggs
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trenchmonkey wrote:
Immature Chicken Vulture Leafhopper Tweety I give. Cute lil guy, Brenton.


Lol!!! Thanks Will!!!



Brenton Biggs
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From Dave's advice:



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Dave In La
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for my taste....I like the crop.
That is a nice little wallhanger....clean up the spots too

I woke up on a critique binge this evening I guess



Brenton Biggs
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Dave In La wrote:
for my taste....I like the crop.
That is a nice little wallhanger


Thanks again Dave, and I agree, I think it is going to go on the wall. I used a site mycanvas.com to make a collage of some photos before, and I think I'm going to do one with this photo!



Tim Kuhn
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Brenton, I do like the image and the the re-do is better. Maybe clean up some of the bg noise Just a thought. An image this nice you want perfect!

Tim



Brenton Biggs
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Tim Kuhn wrote:
Brenton, I do like the image and the the re-do is better. Maybe clean up some of the bg noise Just a thought. An image this nice you want perfect!

Tim


Thanks Tim!!! I will work on the noise next!



Dave In La
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lookin good Brenton.....I played while watching tv.
Just for sumthin to do....you don't mind I hope?


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Brenton Biggs
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Dave In La wrote:
lookin good Brenton.....I played while watching tv.
Just for sumthin to do....you don't mind I hope?


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Don't mind at all Dave!!! That looks awesome!!!


Shasoc
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Very pleasing shot, Brenton, tastefully composed.
Socrate



Brenton Biggs
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Shasoc wrote:
Very pleasing shot, Brenton, tastefully composed.
Socrate


Socrate, I'm glad you enjoy the composition!!! All of this positive feedback is making real happy that I shared this photo!!!



Karl Witt
Registered: Jul 11, 2007
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Brenton, aren't you lucky Dave was in a critiquing mood Sometimes the real simple ones come forward to make excellent images, I too like this one, can't beat the yellow in the greenery and the shapes and textures work well.

Karl



Brenton Biggs
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Karl Witt wrote:
Brenton, aren't you lucky Dave was in a critiquing mood Sometimes the real simple ones come forward to make excellent images, I too like this one, can't beat the yellow in the greenery and the shapes and textures work well.

Karl


Karl, I'm always excited to get a lesson from Dave !!! Glad you liked this one!!!



danjacquitaylo
Registered: Jun 13, 2005
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Pretty little bird and a great shot of it. The revised version from dave is really nice too.
Dan



GAREN
Registered: Apr 21, 2006
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Hi Brenton, I loved the crop version sorry can't help you with IDing the cute little yellow bird.

Garen



ausmr
Registered: Apr 05, 2008
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I like this collaboration going on here.
Nothing to add now - very fine image at the end
-mirek



Brenton Biggs
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danjacquitaylo wrote:
Pretty little bird and a great shot of it. The revised version from dave is really nice too.
Dan


Thanks you Dan!!! P.S. Don't give Dave any credit lol I took the shot!!! JK



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