Comments and Critiques appreciated. Thanks!

Slideshow:
http://sarahseeley.com/danielleandcolealbum/

bump....guess i should have only posted one album critique thread at a time :-)

Love it ... very nice work. Ditto for the other album as well.

Sarah, I like this one better than the other one. Stronger images, more classic feel.
The only critique is the 2 spreads of the night time off camera lighted shots look a little repetitive. I'd have chosen the strongest shots and made 1 spread, or looked for ways to make the 2 spreads look more different. But really, I'm extremely impressed and like the images and album very much.

Totally agree with Suzi.

Marie-Louise

Thanks Suzi! I predesign my albums with a lot of spreads, some of them duplicates so the bride has a lot to choose from. Those 2 nightime spreads were meant to be duplicates, so she can have one or the other.

Thanks for the comments everyone!

Ah -- now I get the duplicates! They make some really amazing albums in Australia that have vellum over the spreads -- then you lift the vellum and see either different or more pictures. I was almost wondering if this was the same thing.

Only nitpick is I don't like the pictures fading into black - I'm a hardline girl, I guess. Great job! Very classic photos.