Broken Glass/updated pic
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T-bone1
Registered: Jun 29, 2008
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Extra sharpening added to highlight the shattered effect.
Please let me know what you think of this!
Thanks -
Tim

First one was pretty small with a cheesey frame. Does this work better, or maybe best to hit the old delete key on this shot?




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eric kim
Registered: Apr 04, 2007
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Interesting concept Tim, however the image is much to small for me to see any detail. Perhaps a larger image?

eric



Tim ONeill
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Kind of elusive subject on this image for me Tim. I do like the two roads, and a turning area effect, but the glass or whatever it is could be tweaked to add to the locale a bit.



T-bone1
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Thanks, guys. Yeah, I think Eric's suggestion of a larger post would help with your issues on this too, Tim. It's actually a frozen puddle that has been smashed. Looks a lot better in larger format.



eric kim
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T-bone1 wrote:
Thanks, guys. Yeah, I think Eric's suggestion of a larger post would help with your issues on this too, Tim. It's actually a frozen puddle that has been smashed. Looks a lot better in larger format.


Ohhhhh it was a smashed puddle? I seriously thought that someone had put a bunch of glass in the middle of the forest, silly me . But let's see that bigger version Tim!

eric



T-bone1
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Bump for revised picture...



eric kim
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Sorry Tim, as one of your "cyber-buddies" on FM, I would have to say you have to put this one in storage. The idea of the shot was excellent, but the execution didn't seem to go as planned. I would have preferred a shot in which I could see the individual jaggiez of the broken pond that looked like glass. However in this far-away shot I can't see much, and without the title I would be very lost in what was going on in this image.

sincerely,
eric



T-bone1
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Thanks for the second look, Eric. Hey, I gave it the old college try though!



Tim ONeill
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More better Tim. Now I get it!



caralan9
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Hi

yeah, seems like there are some good shots in there somewhere - closer to the shattered "glass"

Did you take any others?

Alan



scherertz
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Looks neat! I see some pines to the right, what part of the U.S. are you in?

Morg



T-bone1
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Thank you Tim, Alan, and Morg. It looked so cool in person, but I just couldn't get it to translate onto the camera! I think I'll go back and try some new approaches, including getting closer.
You're right, Morgan, those are pines. This is in Riverside State Park in Spokane, Washington. Pines galore!



Gregory.Rotter
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not saying much to me



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