Morning on the Colorado
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phil_m
Registered: Mar 29, 2008
Total Posts: 12
Country: United States



This image is copyrighted by the owner




Comments welcome

Phil


phil_m
Registered: Mar 29, 2008
Total Posts: 12
Country: United States

Hmm, is it really that bad? lol

Anyone have any comments on what I could do to improve the image?



trenchmonkey
Registered: Oct 22, 2004
Total Posts: 29706
Country: United States

Very nice Phil! I'd maybe lose most of the foreground rock...the foliage is fine, it ties the 2 shores together.



phil_m
Registered: Mar 29, 2008
Total Posts: 12
Country: United States

Appreciate the comments Trenchmonkey- Ill play with some cropping of the foreground and see what I get



Scott Stoness
Registered: Sep 11, 2006
Total Posts: 7873
Country: Canada

For me it is taken at the wrong time of day (hour after sunrise??) and as a result the shadows are very strong which does not make for pretty lighting.

I also don't like the portrait perspective here because it limits you to exclude the intereresting shoreline on left.

More foreground shore and more to the left would have been more interesting.

Thanks for posting. Scott




gates_2
Registered: Feb 27, 2008
Total Posts: 133
Country: United States

Agree with Scott- harsh lighting- unfortunately not much you can do about that other than shoot at a different time of day! Keep posting- don't let the lack of responses get you down!



phil_m
Registered: Mar 29, 2008
Total Posts: 12
Country: United States

Thanks for the input guys. Unfortunately, I was on vacation there and thus am unable to try again with different lighting. I do have a wider picture from a different perspective I'll look at; maybe I can do something with that.



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