Horse Barn
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T-bone1
Registered: Jun 29, 2008
Total Posts: 8535
Country: United States

First real attempt at an old-time look. I really like the color, toning, and texture, but wonder if there's too much detail lost.
Your thoughts?
Thanks! - Tim



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s duncan
Registered: May 31, 2008
Total Posts: 27
Country: New Zealand

The tone is well suited to the image but the vignette and texture need to be dialed way down, you might even try another texture that isn't so repetitive .



eric kim
Registered: Apr 04, 2007
Total Posts: 3075
Country: United States

Sorry Tim this doesnt do it for me. Way too much texture that I can't really even make out the image. The OOF vignette is very strange to me too. I usually prefer a black vignette. Keep trying!

eric



jrrhodes
Registered: May 29, 2008
Total Posts: 797
Country: United States

I agree that black might work better for the vignettes, but I think this is a good start. Maybe the opacity of the grain might be reduced some too. The sepia tone is good.

J.R.



T-bone1
Registered: Jun 29, 2008
Total Posts: 8535
Country: United States

Hey, thanks all for the feedback. Yup, I wondered if it might be a bit much. Back to the drawing board on this!



lazlo369
Registered: Mar 01, 2004
Total Posts: 8760
Country: United States

I agree with Tim, just a bit less texture would have worked better.



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