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Tom Sweeney
Registered: Oct 22, 2008
Total Posts: 169
Country: United States

Beauty Never Grows Old – Portrait of a Golden Retriever.
Looking for C&C, what could I’ve done or should I’ve done..



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Doug Click
Registered: Nov 02, 2006
Total Posts: 195
Country: United States

Beautiful dog! Looks underexposed to me. Flash would have helped.



Steady Hand
Registered: Dec 03, 2007
Total Posts: 13713
Country: United States

Describe your software (photoshop?) and your confidence with the tools and techniques (can you do basics in photoshop?).

It looks underexposed to me.

Simple Solution: adjust levels in photoshop (if you have it).



Tom Sweeney
Registered: Oct 22, 2008
Total Posts: 169
Country: United States

Steady Hand wrote:
Describe your software (photoshop?) and your confidence with the tools and techniques (can you do basics in photoshop?).

It looks underexposed to me.

Simple Solution: adjust levels in photoshop (if you have it).


No Photoshop yet, just downloaded trail of LR2 and playing around with it, PS just not in the budget right now (thinking of taking a CC Photography course and purchasing with the student discount). Only adjustment was a minor crop, playing with new (used) 300mm f4 handheld in not the best light. I appreciate any direction that will help improve my end results.

Camera: Nikon D80
Exposure: 0.003 sec (1/400)
Aperture: f/4
Focal Length: 300 mm
ISO Speed: 800
Exposure Bias: -1/3 EV



Tom Sweeney
Registered: Oct 22, 2008
Total Posts: 169
Country: United States

Doug Click wrote:
Beautiful dog! Looks underexposed to me. Flash would have helped.


Thanks, she was and always will be my favorite. Light was limited and I did not consider my flash...only have the pop up on the D80. Maybe Santa will deliver that SB-800 I asked for

Thanks for commenting.



Jim Rickards
Registered: Dec 02, 2003
Total Posts: 8410
Country: Canada

A big welcome to the forum Tom. I'm glad you posted. You can't get any feedback on your pics when you are lurking.
The pic is underexposed, as already stated and it brightens up nicely when you use a levels adjustment. The eye however still doesn't have much light hitting it, so it doesn't turn out as well as - well as your next shot.
The exif you posted showed -1/3 EV. That obviously wasn't needed, since the result was underexposed.



Numfar
Registered: Aug 30, 2005
Total Posts: 1847
Country: Canada

Very nice looking dog.

To pop the pic a bit for web display, I'd convert it to sRGB (if it's not already).

Then I might try to bump the contrast in whatever your favoured method is.

Two simple ones I use are these:

1) Local contrast bump using Unsharp mask with values: 15/250/0
or
2) Levels adjustment, pulling the right slider in to 235, and the middle slider over to .95




Steady Hand
Registered: Dec 03, 2007
Total Posts: 13713
Country: United States

Tom Sweeney wrote:
Steady Hand wrote:
Describe your software (photoshop?) and your confidence with the tools and techniques (can you do basics in photoshop?).

It looks underexposed to me.

Simple Solution: adjust levels in photoshop (if you have it).


No Photoshop yet, just downloaded trail of LR2 and playing around with it, PS just not in the budget right now (thinking of taking a CC Photography course and purchasing with the student discount). Only adjustment was a minor crop, playing with new (used) 300mm f4 handheld in not the best light. I appreciate any direction that will help improve my end results.

Camera: Nikon D80
Exposure: 0.003 sec (1/400)
Aperture: f/4
Focal Length: 300 mm
ISO Speed: 800
Exposure Bias: -1/3 EV


That sounds like a good idea.

There is also the Photoshop Elements version (pretty cheap).

And I understand there is a free shareware type of PS "clone" (Gimp?).



paulhodson
Registered: Jul 22, 2003
Total Posts: 14344
Country: United Kingdom

These changes were made in the Fastone viewer program. Not as good as PS obviously - but it is free!

Hope this helps



Steady Hand
Registered: Dec 03, 2007
Total Posts: 13713
Country: United States

paulhodson wrote:
These changes were made in the Fastone viewer program. Not as good as PS obviously - but it is free!

Hope this helps



Now THAT looks like a "Golden."



Tom Sweeney
Registered: Oct 22, 2008
Total Posts: 169
Country: United States

Thanks for the comments and direction, played around in light room and could see major improvements with just a little effort. May have to pony up some $$$ when the trail is up, also gives me a reason to try RAW



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