I would like to get some feedback on what you feel when you look at this image. Technical feedbacks are also welcome.

Thanks!
Arnaldo

barok:

From a laymens point of view: I like the composition.

For that matter, I like the color tones and the diagonal helping me focus on the lady thinking - perhaps about the future.

Arnaldo,

I like it, the composition, tones, and framing. Strikes me as 'cool', in a temperature sense and I can feel the wind..."contemplative" if I had to describe in one word.

Nits: man, you've got one dirty sensor; I think I'd clone out the one grass stalk rising behind the subject.

regards,

Bob

Thanks martines34 and Bob!

Bob Jarman wrote:
Nits: man, you've got one dirty sensor; I think I'd clone out the one grass stalk rising behind the subject.

I didn't know that my sensor was that dirty until I used f/22. I shall have it cleaned

The composition is good but I would have left a bit less on the right.

The feeling it give is that of a mom looking over her children or waiting for a loved one to return. "Heightened interest"

Cool breeze.
Not sure the vignetting adds anything on this one.

Scott

Agreed on vignetting, or at least tone it down just a little. To me, seems like a melancholy seasons change, coming into fall.

Was this available light? I love the image but her face looks like it's lit a little strangely, and I think softer light would fit the image better.. just my opinion though.

I have added an edited version with less vignette and a bit of colour change.

Thanks again everyone.

Arnaldo