Orchid shot
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mishu
Registered: Jan 29, 2007
Total Posts: 40
Country: France

Hi,

I have an orchid in a pot and few days ago it started to wither. So I decided to take some pictures to share with you before it's ... dying



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All critiques are welcomed.

Thanks,
Misu


silvawispa
Registered: Nov 10, 2008
Total Posts: 451
Country: United Kingdom

I might not be able to help with the photo's, which are lovely, but i'm good with orchids.

Is it the flowers or the greenery that's dying?

(I might point out that taking the support stick out for the photo's could help. The photo's, not the plant.)

Silver Paul



Scott Stoness
Registered: Sep 11, 2006
Total Posts: 5482
Country: Canada

I like the fist much better. It is well composed and interesting.

I agree with the removal of the support stick. It is much less noticable in the first picture.

The 2nd looks overexposed in the white areas. The 1st looks better.

The composition is good except that I would try to get the top leaf in the picture.



mishu
Registered: Jan 29, 2007
Total Posts: 40
Country: France

Thanks for the tips guys. Only the flowers are dying, I will try one shot without he support stick



silvawispa
Registered: Nov 10, 2008
Total Posts: 451
Country: United Kingdom

When it's lost it's flowers you can cut the flower stem 1cm above the second or third node(one of them may already be swelling), and the plant will put out a new flower stem.

My oldest one has been doing this for 5years now, and none of the rest have failed me yet!

I hope yours comes back and gives you as many years of pleasure as mine has for me.

Paul Silver



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
Total Posts: 7044
Country: United States

I think these are excellent shots. I prefer the BW. As you are planning, I'd eliminate the support stick. In the BW I think you can clone out or significantly darken the petal at top center. You could probably clone out the support stick as well. I'd clean up the first, and tout it around on the BW and Macro forums.
Scott



mishu
Registered: Jan 29, 2007
Total Posts: 40
Country: France

Thanks a lot for your feedback guys. I removed the cropped petal and the support stick.



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It's the first time when I have this type of flower, I hope I will be able to keep it for many, many years.

Misu


silvawispa
Registered: Nov 10, 2008
Total Posts: 451
Country: United Kingdom

liking the bw lots.



Scott Stoness
Registered: Sep 11, 2006
Total Posts: 5482
Country: Canada

Last b/w is best one for me. Good job.



mishu
Registered: Jan 29, 2007
Total Posts: 40
Country: France

Hi guys,

It's winter time and it's a bit cold outside for me to make some new photos, so I start to play a bit with my orchid picture in Photoshop. This is the result.



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Thanks,
Misu


Kaden K.
Registered: Mar 14, 2008
Total Posts: 2448
Country: United States

Misu the color and the sepia image work fine.



Scott Stoness
Registered: Sep 11, 2006
Total Posts: 5482
Country: Canada

I like it but I would reduce the bright area on the stem left bottom 1/3.



Bob Jarman
Registered: Feb 04, 2007
Total Posts: 2067
Country: United States

Misu,

I prefer both the color & sepia versions - interesting how the toning presents an entirely different mood than the color...I think each would serve well in an appropriate setting.

OOC, I'd like to see an alternative with the toning backed-off a notch or two for comparative purposes.

regards,

Bob



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
Total Posts: 7044
Country: United States

BW for me.



zatomik
Registered: Oct 25, 2008
Total Posts: 32
Country: United States

It's brilliant in black and white. Hint of leftover support rod left in the bottom 1/3 of the image that I would turn black. Really like this one.



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