Critique
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coryedwards
Registered: Aug 10, 2008
Total Posts: 10
Country: United States

I have been shooting for 5 months. I am using a Nikon D60. I covet your feedback!
Thanks!
Cory



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4922
Country: New Zealand

The almost luminous sky reflection on the water appeals to my eye. I'd suggest adjusting the color balance to remove the small blue cast, and adjusting the hue and saturation and sharpening the image for greater visual impact. Also, for me, the brown leaf in the lower right corner distracts.



coryedwards
Registered: Aug 10, 2008
Total Posts: 10
Country: United States

Thanks! I didn't even notice the brown leaf, but now that's all I see! :0(



Scott Stoness
Registered: Sep 11, 2006
Total Posts: 7873
Country: Canada

For me the frog is too small in the picture and it is a bit soft. I think closer in to the frog or withouth the frog would work better.



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