1st Post, C&C please!
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NShamet
Registered: Nov 20, 2008
Total Posts: 13
Country: United States

Hey everyone! I've been lurking for a long time now and I have finally built up the courage to post up some my pics! I've learned so much from lurking around here and looking at the work of some of the most amazing photographers around. It's sites like FM that keep amateurs motivated to try to become professional a photographer!
Here are some shots from a session with one of my ex's. Free free to give me some C&C!



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-NShamet


Jim Rickards
Registered: Dec 02, 2003
Total Posts: 8410
Country: Canada

Welcome to the forum. It's always good to see new talent.
#1 has good expression and sharp focus on the eyes. Good job. Where to "stop" the crop in a pose like this can be troublesome. As is, you have it through the hands.
#2 Nice pose here.
#3 Someone's going to say it's better to include the face, but it won't be me. Good composition to show what you wanted to show.

Just curious, how many ex's to you have.



NShamet
Registered: Nov 20, 2008
Total Posts: 13
Country: United States

She is my second ex. Still good friends though. And now that you pointed out the crop in #1 its going to drive me crazy! I'll have to check on the original pic to see if I can expand the crop.

-NShamet



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