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Jeremy Reitman
Registered: Oct 27, 2006
Total Posts: 715
Country: United States

Got to spend Halloween with my family in Texas. My mom asked if I could take some engagement portraits for my sister and her fiancee, they're getting married next March in the Dallas/Fort Worth suburbs. C&C welcome and appreciated.

More posted on my website



deannad
Registered: Nov 12, 2008
Total Posts: 80
Country: United States

Wow, really like the last one, but that left side of the first board distracts me. Maybe darken that edge so it doesn't compete with your pretty sister? I'm sure your mom is happy with the results!



Jeremy Reitman
Registered: Oct 27, 2006
Total Posts: 715
Country: United States

Thanks! I didn't really even see that light board until you pointed it out. Shouldn't be too hard to darken up.

How's this:



Seth Tower
Registered: Oct 10, 2006
Total Posts: 3751
Country: United States

Yeah, last one is the best.

Here's a friendly tip on the first shot: big girl, little swing. Baaaad idea.



Adam73
Registered: Aug 24, 2005
Total Posts: 1401
Country: United States

I really like the 2nd shot but I don't really like the left tilt. Maybe if you straighten it up it may work better.

-Adam



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