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seebeyond
Registered: Apr 25, 2006
Total Posts: 611
Country: United States

My first post in this board. I started to learn about flash photography. I must say it has been fun. Here is one of my favorite subjects. What do you think?



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digigirl
Registered: Jul 01, 2008
Total Posts: 478
Country: United States

I can see why it's one of your favorite subjects - what a goofball! :-)

Nice lighting and DOF.



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
Total Posts: 11903
Country: United States

I'd like to see it larger (maybe 800 pixels long edge).
As is, looks great!
Great expression, sharp, colorful and pops against the soft grayish background.
Scott



seebeyond
Registered: Apr 25, 2006
Total Posts: 611
Country: United States

Hi Scott, I replaced the image with the larger size.
Digigirl, thanks for you comments



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
Total Posts: 11903
Country: United States

Still looks great!
Want a minor nit? Clone out the bit of brown lower right.
Scott



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
Total Posts: 4583
Country: New Zealand

I like this image. Personally, if it was mine I'd use the clone tool to remove the orange band below his lower lip and clean-up the frayed lower left collar edge. I'd crop it a little and apply the unsharp mask to make it pop.



seebeyond
Registered: Apr 25, 2006
Total Posts: 611
Country: United States

Thanks Scott.

AuntiPode, I paid my model with popsicle. The orange line is actually an orange popsicle. He wanted to be paid in advance for this photo shot. Thanks for your comments.



Phil McNeil
Registered: Jan 28, 2004
Total Posts: 1874
Country: United States

Nice shot. What about cropping a little off the right hand side? It would get rid of that brown corner, which is a little distracting and get him out of the center of the frame. I am on my laptop right now, so a little hard to tell, but do you still have any detail in the shadows on the underside of his hat? If you are printing this you might want to watch that there is still some detail there. Eyes too? they look like they could use a touch of lightening to keep detail.


Phil



papageno
Registered: Jul 03, 2003
Total Posts: 3406
Country: United States

He wanted to be paid in advance for this photo shot.

Wise child!



davenfl
Registered: Jun 29, 2008
Total Posts: 3713
Country: United States

Now there is a young man with personality. Minor this and that but a fine picture, well done.



Scott Stoness
Registered: Sep 11, 2006
Total Posts: 7566
Country: Canada

I like it. Nice colors, interesting, good focus and nice depth with bokeh.

For me it is too centred and you should crop lots off right and rotate so he does not seem like he is leaning back so much.

Great subject.



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