Model shoot Soriya
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tiznaki
Registered: Apr 30, 2006
Total Posts: 411
Country: United States

Hello everyone, I hope I'm getting better at this. lol Tell me what you fellas think.


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Paul Bottomley
Registered: May 18, 2007
Total Posts: 477
Country: Canada

#5 really jumps out at me.


liamh
Registered: Jul 24, 2005
Total Posts: 3591
Country: United Kingdom

Yes, I think you are

#2 and #5 win for me


mttran
Registered: Nov 03, 2005
Total Posts: 4707
Country: United States

liamh wrote:
Yes, I think you are

#2 and #5 win for me

+1


tiznaki
Registered: Apr 30, 2006
Total Posts: 411
Country: United States

Thanks liamh. I almost didn't post #5 but I though what the heck.


davenfl
Registered: Jun 29, 2008
Total Posts: 3780
Country: United States

Quite nice I think but I would lose #3, reminds me of Elaine dancing on Seinfeld, not up to the quality of the rest.


DannyG
Registered: Jan 02, 2008
Total Posts: 854
Country: United States

I can see what the #5 voters are so happy about, but # 4 is a pretty cool shot. I like the feel of it.

Thanks for the post.


seebeyond
Registered: Apr 25, 2006
Total Posts: 623
Country: United States

davenfl wrote:
Quite nice I think but I would lose #3, reminds me of Elaine dancing on Seinfeld, not up to the quality of the rest.

I actually like #3 the best.


Jesse Giammatt
Registered: Sep 26, 2007
Total Posts: 69
Country: Canada

im just starting with this stuff too. I must say, your stuff rocks!


tiznaki
Registered: Apr 30, 2006
Total Posts: 411
Country: United States

davenfl- Number 3 is my favorite. Different strokes I guess.

DannyG- Thank you for the feedback.

seebeyond- Me too. Great minds think alike! lol

Jesse Giammatt- Thank you.


Chris Sorensen
Registered: May 25, 2007
Total Posts: 1178
Country: United States

#1 and #3 are great. And yeah, #3 is my fave.


vladan
Registered: Jul 29, 2008
Total Posts: 175
Country: Australia

#1 & 5 works well for me, 3 & 4 are the classic 1/3rd composition which is commonly used for commercial use (titles or text placed in the space etc.) although the models poses should have been better. Good job otherwise!


gunfighter48
Registered: Jul 05, 2008
Total Posts: 88
Country: United States

Number 4 makes the models leg look too fat. Always try not to photograph peoples legs head on when sitting, makes their calves look fat. Have the model turn slightly and maybe move forward on the seat so her calf isn't pressed against the seat.


fstop212
Registered: Jul 30, 2004
Total Posts: 2859
Country: United States

Great shots. Love the lighting. Gorgeous model! Nice job


Sass Quatch
Registered: Oct 09, 2008
Total Posts: 359
Country: United States

#1 andeven more #5 are the winners. Yes you are getting good at this.


Rob001
Registered: Sep 07, 2008
Total Posts: 661
Country: Canada

I see what gunfighter is saying about #4 - and I didn't notice it until he pointed it out. But I just love the facial expression in #4. It's still my fav. Nice shots.


timhpark
Registered: Jan 04, 2007
Total Posts: 3453
Country: United States

Really great work! I like them all! Great lighting and posing.

Tim


onebear
Registered: Jan 06, 2006
Total Posts: 1812
Country: Canada

#5 for me as well, even though I find #3 quite interesting as well, classic "S", with a twist


lutty moreira
Registered: Dec 17, 2007
Total Posts: 68
Country: Spain

my favorite is #3...
the posing, the shadow (and i'm not a lover of cast shadows!), the negative space...


Pfiltz
Registered: Feb 15, 2002
Total Posts: 5170
Country: United States

What's wrong with her legs in 3?


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