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bryanlindsey
Registered: Nov 11, 2008
Total Posts: 1930
Country: United States

A mini-shoot with friends. How can these portraits be better? (light can be a little harsh in Houston, hence some blown highlights...)

Is this good enough for semi-pro photography?



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Thanks.

Bryan


matonanjin
Registered: Feb 01, 2008
Total Posts: 515
Country: United States

Don't like cut off legs in 1 & 3.



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
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Country: United States

1. Dont cut off the legs.
Post is distracting, takes away from the couple. Try to keep backgrounds simple.
2. Better, but he is not sharp; she is. Color, "action" is pleasing. I think you either need to crop more from the left, or less. Back of his head is cut off.
3. Best. But I'd either include their full length or crop mid-thigh. Extraneous leaves far right. Shooting from further right down the length of the walk might have worked better.

Scott



bryanlindsey
Registered: Nov 11, 2008
Total Posts: 1930
Country: United States

All great points. Please keep them coming!

Bryan



sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
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Glad its helpful.



Beowulfenator
Registered: Oct 22, 2006
Total Posts: 392
Country: Ukraine

I think that was not the best time of day to shoot. The sky is blown out. The faces are too flat for my taste. Also I have this feeling you're getting motion blur on #2, but it's too small to tell for sure. And you're getting some pretty wicked fringing on #3. Gotta work on your technique.

Say, did you take these with a point and shoot camera?

Apart from technical stuff... Call me conservative, but i'd love to see some open eyes on #1.



Beowulfenator
Registered: Oct 22, 2006
Total Posts: 392
Country: Ukraine

Oh yea, and maybe you should try taking people pics from a lower angle (on your knees).



zatomik
Registered: Oct 25, 2008
Total Posts: 33
Country: United States

For #1) I think this shot should be done standing closer to the subjects and the rail, and with your lens almost parallel to the rail. Also might be nice to get that depth of field effect by using a larger Ap. and faster shutter.

Too many colors (red post takes away from subjects) and colors of light - maybe convert this to BW and crop?

Here's what I get from the one above but this will look better starting from your original because there is enough information to make a crop like this and still see some details.

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