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parokhodov
Registered: May 19, 2008
Total Posts: 248
Country: Russia

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Jim Rickards
Registered: Dec 02, 2003
Total Posts: 7963
Country: Canada

You are really getting good at this "pretty girl" stuff. Good to see.
In this one, I think you allowed the face to get too bright. Part of the dress is extra bright as well. Excellent composition and 'look'.


diamondsdr47
Registered: Jun 25, 2006
Total Posts: 250
Country: United States

Misha, the shadow killing it...also not sure what did you do to the neck and the cheek skin the transition looks awful...Hope it helps.
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parokhodov
Registered: May 19, 2008
Total Posts: 248
Country: Russia


Jim Rickards
Registered: Dec 02, 2003
Total Posts: 7963
Country: Canada

Nice. There is a little dark spot in the middle of her hand.


mttran
Registered: Nov 03, 2005
Total Posts: 4378
Country: United States

Mikhail, i like your older version better - tune the light down much more to get it right - the skin texture is a little too smooth, cut this in half then should be fine.


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