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Icypeak
Registered: Jul 10, 2003
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A somewhat uncomfortable composition for me, given that the irregular shape of this stream-side pond makes it look a bit tilted, although the tripod and pano head were leveled. I think it still works, anyway. This is in the San Juans of Colorado, not far from Silverton.



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-David


floris
Registered: May 11, 2006
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Very cool mix of colors and abstractish shapes! I'm sure the full version looks a lot better than the web representation, there's got to be loads more detail in it. Well worth the uncomfortable position. And it looks fine level wise to me - the vertical trees make sure of that.



ScaryFox
Registered: Dec 30, 2004
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Definitely works for me. The colour bands are great, especially the almost pink bushes. I also like how clear the water is - you have reflections and can see below the surface.
It doesn't look tilted as there is enough depth to realise the prespective.
Ute



santos
Registered: Feb 19, 2004
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An amazingly harmonious, totally unexpected color palette. This image shines first through these strongly defined pastels. Then come the vertical and horizontal layers, and that great tension that they provide.

santiago



Tim ONeill
Registered: Feb 06, 2003
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Beauty Dave. The pastels are a surprise. I think it works beautifully. The reflections are positively 3D.



Bart Carrig
Registered: Nov 12, 2004
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Beautiful Dave. Great idea on the composition/pano. These are great colors along the Mineral Creek road. You did disappear there for a long time, now I see why. As mentioned, well worth the effort. Would this be one of your famous canvas prints?

Bart



Icypeak
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floris wrote:
Very cool mix of colors and abstractish shapes! I'm sure the full version looks a lot better than the web representation, there's got to be loads more detail in it. Well worth the uncomfortable position. And it looks fine level wise to me - the vertical trees make sure of that.


Thanks Floris. This is a 6-shot pano, and has tons of detail. My position wasn't uncomfortable, but just wrestling with compromises in both the on-site composition as well as the exact crop from the full (wider) pano to try to develop some sort of balance and visual flow from this simple but chaotic scene.



Icypeak
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Thanks guys/gal! I really loved the density of the surprising colors here, and the great detail just below the surface, like a half-silvered mirror. I'm glad that the verticality of the trees gives enough reference to not make the horizontal features seem tilted. Bart, thanks so much for suggesting we head down this road on the way back to Ouray. I haven't printed it yet, still wrestling with whether my affection for it is mainly from my personal experience of being there, or if it may have a wider appeal.

-Dave



JimFox
Registered: Jan 11, 2005
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Hey Dave,

Pretty sweet array of colors here! Definately like it, and I think it would look cool on canvas.

Jim



David Leask
Registered: Nov 19, 2003
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Wow .... that's a beauty David - such great detail!
Well done.
David



aFeinberg
Registered: Mar 15, 2006
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I really enjoy this one. Good boarder between abstract and landscape. I would however pull the brightness down a bit. Well done

aF



Allen Maestas
Registered: Feb 18, 2005
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I agree about the brightness, but it's a stunning image, very well done.

Al



parsons
Registered: Mar 29, 2004
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good stuff, love the subtle tones, if a little bright. really like the still reflection.

simon



sierasong1
Registered: Mar 28, 2005
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Dave,
I really like this shot as a pano. (I also like it because I was there :-) You always manage to find the best compositions for the subject. Well done.



Rosemary R
Registered: Jan 08, 2004
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I like it, David. It feels a bit oversharpened for me.



realkuhl
Registered: Apr 22, 2003
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Wow, what a nice mix of pattern and shape. I see this being too bright and too sharp as well.... but man what a shot.



gordon l
Registered: Aug 17, 2005
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I think you have a very good eye to see this. It works very well. I don't think I would have picked this out of a landscape like you did.

Gordon



Bob Kane
Registered: Mar 02, 2007
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I also agree about the brightness, although I do like very much it the way it is. Apart from having a very nice image, you also have an interesting photograph to play with if you're inclined to do that.

Bob



jd02
Registered: Jan 31, 2006
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The composition of this will work I think, but it looks a little crisp on my monitor. Otherwise very nice.

Daniel



Icypeak
Registered: Jul 10, 2003
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Thank you all for your comments. The appearance of excessive brightness and sharpness mainly lies in the surrounding pink/red brush, which was being side/back-lit and consisted of millions of tiny leaves glowing like hell - appearing just like this! That feeling like I was inside of a Monet painting was one of things that attracted me to the scene, and on looking at the high-res file, the sharpening looks correct. I think I'll have a go at making a large print of this.

-David



dnadal
Registered: Jan 11, 2005
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Solid image, David...I particularly like the look of that reflection...ephemeral. Dave



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