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monochrome Registered: Aug 24, 2007 Total Posts: 1216 Country: United States |
Found this chair almost covered, I walked past it once, not seeing it. ![]() Linked to larger image and removed the poor frame. Tell me now, how could I make this better? Thanks Yeah the light was pretty bad, it was 90F before noon that day. Edited by monochrome on Jul 22, 2008 at 03:07 PM GMT Edited by monochrome on Jul 22, 2008 at 03:08 PM GMT Edited by monochrome on Jul 22, 2008 at 03:09 PM GMT Edited by monochrome on Jul 22, 2008 at 03:09 PM GMT |
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R. Francois Registered: Jun 12, 2006 Total Posts: 3280 Country: Netherlands |
cool subject. i know that we are on the web, but i have a high resolution screen and this size is a tad to small to really judge if it's nice. looking at it now i think your image lacks a focal point. it's kinda busy. Maybe the light is to harsh. or maybe it is just the size that is killing the effect right now. |
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Dneufarth Registered: May 31, 2008 Total Posts: 300 Country: United States |
I agree that this is posted too small, and would also add the frame is too thick. Also, I think the subject is interesting, but somehow it doesn't seem like it is the subject in this image. Thanks, Derek |
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glyons Registered: Apr 09, 2008 Total Posts: 775 Country: Austria |
It has something, you need to bring the some contrast between the leaves and the chair. Have you tried some filters, like a green, red or blue |
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skipc Registered: May 12, 2006 Total Posts: 3020 Country: United States |
suggest burning in the lighter foliage and edges. create a new layer on top, set to soft light mode, use a very soft black brush set to 17-27%. essentially vignetting the chair. best...skip |
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Albert Taylor Registered: Oct 03, 2006 Total Posts: 1589 Country: United States |
I agree with skip about the vignetting if you're ever going to bring out the chair from in amongst the foliage..possibly tweaking the original color image in Channel Mixer, as a nod to Gavins suggestion, to help differentiate the tones. |
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monochrome Registered: Aug 24, 2007 Total Posts: 1216 Country: United States |
Thanks for the suggestions, I need more if anybody has them. The image does look good in color, but I'm determine to make it come out well in B&W. If it takes me how ever long it takes me. I need to know more about CS3 to do it, the more I get from you guys the better. |
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skipc Registered: May 12, 2006 Total Posts: 3020 Country: United States |
quick and dirty with no change in tone as demonstration to an approach. |
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monochrome Registered: Aug 24, 2007 Total Posts: 1216 Country: United States |
skip, that is nice, Thanks for the guidance. I need to get a mouse to use on my MBP, touchpad just doesn't cut it for this. Heck might as well get a Wacom. |
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skipc Registered: May 12, 2006 Total Posts: 3020 Country: United States |
just saw this on macsurfer refurb graphire4 tablet $40 my experience is that the 4x5 works well on a MBP. best...skip |
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monochrome Registered: Aug 24, 2007 Total Posts: 1216 Country: United States |
Thanks again, I'm not too worried about the trackpad, more of handshaking. I tried some burning yesterday after your first post. I need some thing else. |
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skipc Registered: May 12, 2006 Total Posts: 3020 Country: United States |
monochrome wrote: |
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Albert Taylor Registered: Oct 03, 2006 Total Posts: 1589 Country: United States |
Now I know this is not at all what you were thinking about, but you did kind of open the door to suggestions... I was just having a little fun with it.. |
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Dneufarth Registered: May 31, 2008 Total Posts: 300 Country: United States |
Albert, you are one trippy dude. This is very cool. Derek |
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monochrome Registered: Aug 24, 2007 Total Posts: 1216 Country: United States |
Albert, I do like that. |
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Albert Taylor Registered: Oct 03, 2006 Total Posts: 1589 Country: United States |
monochrome wrote: |
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monochrome Registered: Aug 24, 2007 Total Posts: 1216 Country: United States |
OK, so things slowed down and I gave another try. ![]() |