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unenlightened Registered: Jul 08, 2008 Total Posts: 14 Country: United States |
![]() A photo of Breach, a sculpture at UNL. Comments and critique welcome. Edited by unenlightened on Jul 12, 2008 at 10:40 PM GMT |
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timbudtwo Registered: Aug 07, 2006 Total Posts: 147 Country: United States |
I like the shot. It has a spooky, strange feeling to it. Fairytale-like. However, my eye kind of drowns in the bottom left portion of the shot. I dono what it is about it though... |
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Andrew K Registered: Oct 02, 2007 Total Posts: 63 Country: South Africa |
WOW, thats all i can say. Brilliant well done. |
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unenlightened Registered: Jul 08, 2008 Total Posts: 14 Country: United States |
Tim: Good catch. I think it's the hill leading downward, but nothing leading back up that does that. I'll try to work with it this afternoon, but fixing it may require adding something to the scene. Maybe a re-shoot with a friend standing very very still. |
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Yakim Peled Registered: Nov 18, 2004 Total Posts: 5734 Country: Israel |
I like the first one much better. Nice parallelism. |
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zackarylove Registered: Jun 06, 2008 Total Posts: 10 Country: United States |
i think the first re-do is the best. i love this shot. |
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unenlightened Registered: Jul 08, 2008 Total Posts: 14 Country: United States |
Yakim and zackarylove: Thanks for the recommendations. |
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haymest Registered: Oct 24, 2005 Total Posts: 557 Country: United States |
I really like the colors on this one. I've never quite managed to get that level of purple in the sky. Great shot! |
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unenlightened Registered: Jul 08, 2008 Total Posts: 14 Country: United States |
Thanks. I usually curse the city lights when I'm doing night shots, but they actually helped this time. |