Portraits & Snapshots of a Girl
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Patrick Dorthy
Registered: Dec 17, 2006
Total Posts: 38
Country: United States

These are a few I took a year ago. Not sure if the color balance looks right. Please C&C.
Thank you



















nick bellotto
Registered: Nov 27, 2006
Total Posts: 170
Country: Italy

number 3 is just gorgeous!!!

I would suggest what follows:




Patrick Dorthy
Registered: Dec 17, 2006
Total Posts: 38
Country: United States

Thank you Nick. Nice adjustment.



Scott Stoness
Registered: Sep 11, 2006
Total Posts: 3232
Country: Canada

1 and 2 are too soft for my liking and I would crop in much closer to the subject with only a bit of non head showing. She is very pretty and good expression. Good eyes. Lots of cropping and sharpening would improve for me.

3 has very nice expression. The challenge is that the background is distracting but if you crop you would leave the dark post on the left and cut through her arm. I llike nicks suggestion as a compromise but would be trempted to blur the fence out in his crop and the cut through arm is not ideal. More sharpening would improve.



Patrick Dorthy
Registered: Dec 17, 2006
Total Posts: 38
Country: United States

Thank you for you input Scott.



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