Comments always welcome .

Melas--A striking and sensual entry. Best of luck.--Frank

Great shot. The unusual crop adds a lot of interest.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.

Hi Melas,

Welcome to the forum. I like the composition in this shot a lot. I think I would like it in color to see the shade of the lipstick, but still a very nice shot in B & W. Good luck this week.

Steve S.

Very nicely done. I do think the color would have made this pop a lot more, but you really captured the assignment well. Glad to see you come a board my friend. You beat me out this week.

Steve R

Thanks to all for commenting.I am really enjoying these assignments. If anyone has any suggestions on how I can improve on any of my shots please let me know as I am new to photography.
Thanks again to all

Melas

Very nice, and a neat crop, too.

Hey You !
I tried to add color to my lips only but my hand was not steady enough to trace them.
Guess it is time to put the photoshop on here ya let me so kindly borrow.

Melas

Thank You! I've seen your work and I am amazed by it. Hopefully I will be just as good one day.
Thank You
Melas

Thanks for the comment and suggestions. I tried to color the lips and keep everything else B&W but I am just learning how to edit and do not have a steady hand so if you have any suggestions on an easier way to do that please let me know.

Thanks Again
Melas

Thank You!

Thanks Frank

Interesting shot.
I agree with the comments that it would've been stronger in color.
Good luck.

You go girl. My prodeja. (spelling of course) You made it in the finals. awesome and strong shot. See you tomorrow

Steve

Steven Roberts wrote:
You go girl. My prodeja. (spelling of course) You made it in the finals. awesome and strong shot. See you tomorrow
Steve

Thanks Steve. I am glad that you took me under your wing and gave me the courage to join this forum. I can't wait to see what we come up with for this weeks assignment. See you soon!
Melas